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Someone Help Me
Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 11:30 am
by -TraMaTiK-
heres the song i said i wuz definetly recording,lyrics i posted here in scripz but there also on this link leave some feed plz and thanks
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6251763
Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 12:03 pm
by 16 Micz
its an ok track, i personally dont like your voice on this sounds a lil creepy pedophile-ish, but the story telling and lyrics were good, keep workin at it man.
Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 10:55 am
by Haz
Dope Story/Lyrics <--- i Agree
u just Needah W!ork on your Delivery & get your voice fa Rappin its a Good Trac Dough
Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 10:57 am
by -TraMaTiK-
thanks 4 the feed so far yall
Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 11:05 am
by Omega Bill
Aye this songs is real deep man. Love the lyrics, good story-telling. Like other said, only thing you realy need work on is your delivery. Get your delivery down, youll be even better.
Keep droppin.
Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 3:48 pm
by Arvincible
man i like the concept, and the lyrics but the way you laid the track down it was like southern-ish, i bet itll be pretty dope if you edit it up a little bit.
good shit though, im just tellin you how it sounds to me but ive never hit an audio track up heh
Posted: Mon Feb 11, 2008 7:18 pm
by Ambiguous Realm
leavin feed since u asked me to, i like the concept of it, it needs super mixing done lol.. the lyrics r decent nothing outstanding but good enough, the way u did the hook was weird.. it was like.. ah...hahahahaha... i dunno it was weird as fuck.. more funny then depressing.. still... good concept n lyrics, u got the flow for it but its lacking alot of quality