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this went 2 a rockish beat i downloaded from soundclick i juz never finished what i wuz doin with it but ill post this verse..leave some feed n ill return it

its time'ta mix a little
bit of rap n rock
n show these haterz
that i am back'ta shock
the whole world
cuz what they lack i got
pure energy
so every track iz hot
but u kno u shudnt
really fight the sound
my words causin fire
which ignites the ground
so in reality
it excites the town
ta keep jumpin
thru the night 4 now
so i wanna see ya
just pump ya fist
start wildin out
n go jump ta this
makin sure u and
no chump'll miss
how all the sudden
the damn magic hits
the moment u
see how tramatik spits
u cant deny its estatic shit

idk how to read this lol
but its got a good rhythm to it and i can see it more rock than rap dawg
ur takin this up to audio right? Keep it up my dude.





btw
I left you some feed dawg, can u do me a favor and vote for my battle wit proph?
thx

yea ill vote and i might record it i still got the beat i just gotta make 2 more verses if im gonna record it..but thanks 4 the feed n uppin

honestly it aint bad the beginnin was the better read for me tho


its time'ta mix a little
bit of rap n rock
n show these haterz
that i am back'ta shock
the whole world
cuz what they lack i got
pure energy
so every track iz hot
but u kno u shudnt
really fight the sound
my words causin fire
which ignites the ground <<<<< fav part