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The final politically incorrect #8.

I will be doing one more series.

And at some point, I'll post up the whole politically incorrect #6 as well.

It's all planned out. More on that later.
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Yo, as a young-man, I lost hope-in-faith
smoke-an-eighth, thank the gun-man
the liquor store isn't open-late, so we scope-the-place
the dope-is-laced, we roll-with-coke, lovin the potent-taste
Bush stole-the-votes, so? I'm blazed beyond-belief, like no-shit
I came up on-the-streets like road-strips
I didn't hold-clips,at a young-age, even then unpaid, but on sundays
i was on the corner, no gun-play, but everyone swung-blades
we'd jump trains, a bunch of drunk-days
a blunt-phaze it was fun in our dumb-ways
i made it out unscathed without-faith just a devout-hate
a satanist outtake from being outlate then outcame
more madness the shame from my evil-tactics
i should blame for my peoples-actions
now the government is tappin-my-lines-illegally
who else will I happen-to-find-deceiving-me
when the people on my side are acting-with-blind-thievery
that's why my rapping-is-rhymed-evilly
my dad didn't care enough-to-stay, we threw his stuff-away
i don't give a flying fucking-today
as I puff-a-J, smokin this joint-with-no-concern
I let it burn with the world to the point-of-no-return

Sick shit dude. Not the best piece Ive read of yours, but not the worst either.

as I puff-a-J, smokin this joint-with-no-concern
I let it burn with the world to the point-of-no-return
^^
Nice closer guy.

I didn't hold-clips,at a young-age, even then unpaid, but on sundays
i was on the corner, no gun-play, but everyone swung-blades
i made it out unscathed without-faith just a devout-hate
a satanist outake from being outlate then outcame
more madness the shame from my evil-tactics
i should blame for my peoples-actions
now the government is tappin-my-lines-illegally
who else will I happen-to-find-deceiving-me
when the people on my side are acting-with-blind-thievery

fav part^,still killin that flow and vocab wuz slightly better then ive read from u lately,nice 2 see u drop again u always drop somethin worth readin,keep it up

the dope-is-laced, we roll-with-coke, lovin the potent-taste <--- Word Up...



now the government is tappin-my-lines-illegally
who else will I happen-to-find-deceiving-me <-- Reminded Me of Pac
when the people on my side are acting-with-blind-thievery
that's why my rapping-is-rhymed-evilly
my dad didn't care enough-to-stay, we threw his stuff-away < Related 2 Dis..
i don't give a flying fucking-today
as I puff-a-J, smokin this joint-with-no-concern
I let it burn with the world to the point-of-no-return <-- Reminded me of Immortals song "Point of no Return"

Da Parts i Pointed out Plex Wus da Illest Parts 2 Me... i Like How u Approached Dis Series...

Alot To Relate To... jus Came wid Str8 Feelin.. Lookin Forward 2 Ur Next one... ( MAKE IT LONGER)

Shit i ain't no favs..that whole thing was nice...foreal homie...good shit keep droppin dope shit like this

Nice plex.
Lyrically, (arguably) one of your best pieces.
This was a nice ending to the PI series.
All reall shit here.

Fave bars:

Yo, as a young-man, I lost hope-in-faith
smoke-an-eighth, thank the gun-man

my dad didn't care enough-to-stay, we threw his stuff-away
i don't give a flying fucking-today
as I puff-a-J, smokin this joint-with-no-concern
I let it burn with the world to the point-of-no-return

Yo, as a young-man, I lost hope-in-faith
smoke-an-eighth, thank the gun-man
the liquor store isn't open-late, so we scope-the-place
the dope-is-laced, we roll-with-coke, lovin the potent-taste

now the government is tappin-my-lines-illegally
who else will I happen-to-find-deceiving-me
when the people on my side are acting-with-blind-thievery
that's why my rapping-is-rhymed-evilly
my dad didn't care enough-to-stay, we threw his stuff-away
i don't give a flying fucking-today
as I puff-a-J, smokin this joint-with-no-concern
I let it burn with the world to the point-of-no-return

those were the best part in my eyes, structures a bit off but flowed consistantly, nice job plex