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She Walked Out

Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 7:59 pm
by MesaR
She's Not Coming Back She Said, Know Im Thinking The Fams-Dieing
Still Crying Thinking How Did Exchanging Words Turn Into Hands-Flyin
I'm Stuck In A Bad Life But How Did My Dear Sister Learn-From-Me?
I Wish She Turned-To-Me, But She Went In The Car And Turned-The-Key
I Sat In My Room With The Stero Blasting Tunes, Bumping-Our-Song
She Left 10 Minutes Ago, And Mom And Dad Seem Like Nothing-Is-Wrong

this just happend i felt like writting about it.. i dont even wont feedback just thought i would share my thoughts

Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 8:02 pm
by Arvincible
yeah you should share it after the story ends. like so this would actually be worth a read.

Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 2:46 am
by Haz
u Faggot u Neva Droped in are Battle

Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 10:47 pm
by Khan
pain is always the best music.

Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 4:02 pm
by Viral
Khan wrote:pain is always the best music.
its the best way to drown also


but...for somethin that was that short...it held emotion..none the less....next time....get more detailed n into it...im sure u should have more to write soon...maybe...keep droppin

Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 9:33 pm
by Khan
yeah the best way to drown in a bottle.

but at the same time, when you write about pain, the people who listen, can feel it, and hear it in your voice, and also a lot of people felt pain before so it just reminds them of the past and are like "I feel this dude on what hes saying". Makes your fans better understand you.