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love has fled and the music eternally forgotten
my heart hums the hymns which were never really accepted
you couldn't even answer mie
i guess i wasnt worth the effort
wondering for days why you didnt bother writing
i should have known there was something you were hiding
i was that everylasting drug
until you decided to kick the habit

her harmony oushined mine
her combination of sounds you pined
her beauty was far more greater than I

and once again my tune begins to clatter
my love for you didnt even seem to matter
the heart screams, ignoring this catastrophe
but the band flees following them slowly

i knew this was the perfect match
but not necessarily the perfect catch
love has escaped today, tomorrow, forever
never will it come back, not today, not tomorrow, not ever

behind the doors the tears will drastically fall
but you'll never see a frown behind my walls
a smile will always grace upon this precious face
even if my heart continues to ache

you will miss this image, you will miss this sound
but you couldnt wait long enough for me to touch your ground

the choir continues to chant:
'every great song ends sometime right?'
for once, the stupid singers, were actually precise.

wondering for days why you didnt bother writing
i should have known there was something you were hiding

^^that one made me cry lol jk, its real a nice line...real catchy


the choir continues to chant:
'every great song ends sometime right?'
for once, the stupid singers, were actually precise.

Now that was an effin great ^^^ closer!!
I havent read ur other ones so im about to right now bye!

i like this, this is Real, unlike half the shit we write, this has meaning.

Good Job.

All of it was nice...great stuff ma...where are you from?

stop trying to hit on her scott..lol

im from australia. thanks for the feed boys

Khan wrote:i like this, this is Real, unlike half the shit we write, this has meaning.

Good Job.

And I Quote

i knew this was the perfect match
but not necessarily the perfect catch
love has escaped today, tomorrow, forever
never will it come back, not today, not tomorrow, not ever

this part remind me of emily dickinson
how she repeats herself different words ,same meanings
this was a great closer, keep writing sam!

thanks for the feed, i think this was the best out of all three.

This was nice. Had a great closer. And I think I know what this is about now, lol.

australia? whoa....lol i bet your voice is cute.....hahaha fuck u khan

damn it scott, stop trying to hit on the Australian chick, shes just gonna hit you with "Rejection"..lmao

Get Use To That.

hahahahaha meany.

i was asking you fruit bitch