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(Aim,Fire)

Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 6:30 pm
by Haz
He Dont Believe in god but i Guess he Dyin-2-See-He
Might as Well Say hez "Ghost"..(No Body) Tryin-2-Be-Me

It Makez Me Sick if u Wanna Put up Stakez i'll Pick
You Put ya Life Up & if u Lose i'll Stake u Prick..

"Broken Lighter" Diz (Flama) Couldnt Takah Flick
but He Can Act Enough on dis Site To Makah Flick

Main-Rollz Playd by u N ya Mans Lame-Souls..
"Ripd Kicks" humorin Demselves Still GIT KICKS

"What these bitches Want from a nigga?" my Style & Swag
my Piles of Bags?? or my Judgement on um , Shuld i strt "Trialin Fags?"

Fuck-Ya-Teamz Suckah Scream when Bush hedgers to ya back Pluck ya Spleen
Piece-By-Piece i Cant Get "Bought in to Treason" if you Try n "Lease-My-Peace".

im Above Growin Dere Atleast-Seeds dats why Dey Stay ina ball I grow & get least feed
dey "Require Water" if a doods tryna be a "crown bud" hazard'll Have "Sire Slaughterd"

if u Spit on da Mic u'll Blow ears away Lyk a Rockit Sound jus dont botha Stop It Clown
u Tryna Elevated like u Came Off a Jet but u Ain getin nowhere like Plex's sex Activity OFF DA NET

Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 6:50 pm
by Brah-Vo
This piece was nice.
Wasnt bad, wasnt anything special.
just another hazard piece.
Startw as abit hazy but u made it back

It Makez Me Sick if u Wanna Put up Stakez i'll Pick
You Put ya Life Up & if u Lose i'll Stake u Prick..

"Broken Lighter" Diz (Flama) Couldnt Takah Flick
but He Can Act Enough on dis Site To Makah Flick

^^ didnt like those lines


Fuck-Ya-Teamz Suckah Scream when Bush hedgers to ya back Pluck ya Spleen
Piece-By-Piece i Cant Get "Bought in to Treason" if you Try n "Lease-My-Peace".

im Above Growin Dere Atleast-Seeds dats why Dey Stay ina ball I grow & get least feed
dey "Require Water" if a doods tryna be a "crown bud" hazard'll Have "Sire Slaughterd"

^^ liked those bars.

Leave proper feed on my drop with arv btw.

Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 7:16 pm
by Ambiguous Realm
good creative shyt, u seem to be improvin with each bar, now if only we could get u to drop an audio battle verse on me lol.. that'll be the day haha.. good stuff tho

Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 10:42 pm
by Khan
it was good, for some reason i felt like it was more of a poem.

but like i said it was good.

Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 4:40 am
by ~Symbolikull~
was that first line directed towards me??? either way this wasnt that bad, like ekoms said got better towards the end of it

Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 6:50 am
by Haz
lol Knew u Wuld Ask

Nah ,

"Say hes Ghost "No body" Tryin 2 Be me..

Ghosts have no Bodys... No dis Wusnt Directed 2 U...

Thanks For da Feed Every it'll be Returned

Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 6:52 am
by ~Symbolikull~
it didnt sound like but i jus wanted to clarify, u know?

Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 7:10 am
by thaphantom
nice drop.....yeah it didnt kinda sound more poetic then a rap...but you see pac pulled off the poetic stuff....but yeah where ya audio's at i wanna hear u spit?

Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 7:13 am
by Arvincible
lmao you already got my feed bastard, this shit is funny,

i thought you were dissin ghost too
but yeah peace