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Im under control so I smash the pressure,
Diamond in the ruff notta platinum record,
Cut the bullshit u talkin jus show respect,
Ur jus like me, broke an holdin no events,
Put the mics down, fists up its fight club,
No knifes tucked but ima leave ur lights cut,
It's a vise grip grasp n collapsing ya throat,
Im spittin sick like a fein relapsing on dope,
Ya its more but still its never a war on illest,
Ur flows trapped, he raps to form and build it,
Im quik to take u outside if u think u outshined,
Ghost or sym in drops of the unkrowned rhymes,
Im gone again but instead ima disappear ya soul,
Notta good look 4 u walk-in and mirrors explode,
Im here an u know, its my time u go “duck a sickâ€

It's a vise grip grasp n collapsing ya throat,
Im spittin sick like a fein relapsing on dope,
Ya its more but still its never a war on illest,
Ur flows trapped, he raps to form and build it,
Im quik to take u outside if u think u outshined,
Ghost or sym in drops of the unkrowned rhymes,
Im gone again but instead ima disappear ya soul,
Notta good look 4 u walk-in and mirrors explode,

loved that part^,flow was nice and multies came in smooth,for some reason that last line just made me lol idk why lol but its good,pretty obvious who this iz directed at,shudda made it longer but its good

Ya its more but still its never a war on illest,
Ur flows trapped, he raps to form and build it,
Im quik to take u outside if u think u outshined,
Ghost or sym in drops of the unkrowned rhymes,
Im gone again but instead ima disappear ya soul,
Notta good look 4 u walk-in and mirrors explode,



Liked that part a lot. Wish this coulda been longer to put junior in his place, but in all honesty I don't think you're done with him yet, lol.

Flowed well, wordplay was nice, only thing bad is I wish it was longer.

thanx for the feed guys, its appreciated


uppin

good drop homie....i liked almost everything about it....i like how you used that about illest lol that was nice

for a short subliminal..it was pretty straight...decent use of multis....shoulda made it longer tho....keep droppin

theres more comin, thank for the feed tho

oooh good stuff lol fuck that nigga too lol jk your verse had me goin tho

the flow went really nice when i read it my dude, real nice.
I hate bein late on the quoting cuz its all taken lol
but to tell the truth i woulda just quoted all of it. Its pretty dope and a decent piece considering there will be more coming, it does sound like an intro too hehe

This is my fave piece from you other than one 16 piece...

appreciate the feed

Dope flow
vocab was amazing as usual.
Should have like a "symbollikull vocab" level lol.
Overall a dope piece.

One thing though, could u explain the topic?

Raiza apparently you haven't listened to "War on Illest"

Is this an ekoms diss?

OHHH
OHHH
fuuuuck

NOW I GET IT.

WATER + FIRE.
fUCK IM A DUMBFUCK. lMAO. MY BAD BOYS.

its raiza on not knowin, appreciate the feed though guys... i dont think this will amount to anything other than good ol dissin each other...

Damn Yo
So Many Shots At Ekoms in Da Scriptures rite Now lol

Like Viral Said For a Short Subliminal Dis wus Nice

No knifes tucked but ima leave ur lights cut, < ill Line


It's a vise grip grasp n collapsing ya throat,
Im spittin sick like a fein relapsing on dope,
Ya its more but still its never a war on illest,
Ur flows trapped, he raps to form and build it,
Im quik to take u outside if u think u outshined,
Ghost or sym in drops of the unkrowned rhymes, < best Part

You came All Through wid Multis.. Kept um Consistent in ya Flow
Alotta Shots Taken lol .. it Wus a Good Read..
I Wanna see yall Lyrically Sparr..