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Posted: **Wed Feb 20, 2008 12:52 pm**

Fighting?

I'm Tired Of Reading These Little Ass Arguments//
Debating On A Bar-N-Sense, But It's Really To Far-N-Bent//
Meaning, People Jack Up Words And Turn Them About//
Voting, Posting, Hating, This Site-Only-Full-Of-Doubts//
Fakes Like Swagger ,He Bites-Only-Fools-N-Pouts//
Call-outs To Battles, Audio To Text//
Scriptures to Cyphers, Personals To Rep//
Personally Protect, Wack ass Rookies, To Hardcore Vets//
Everyone Has One Goal, Thats To "Make Music"//
But When It All Comes Down You Only Make Excuses//
Kinda Abusive, The Way I Tell It Straight//
Push Yourself Harder, Fuck A Twixs I'm Not Giving A Break.

Was Reading some shit people were posting, thought i spit about it.

Posted: **Wed Feb 20, 2008 2:49 pm**

lol im a big fan of this one.

good piece my dude

Posted: **Wed Feb 20, 2008 3:55 pm**

Shit was nice man.
Your a good writer.
Props. keep up.

Posted: **Wed Feb 20, 2008 3:57 pm**

short n sweet...good multis...i liked it...keep droppin

Posted: **Wed Feb 20, 2008 7:55 pm**

Thanks for the feed guys, like i said i was just reading alot of shit, i was like "God damn, Stop Bitchin"

so i said fuck it, and spit something on it..lol

Posted: **Wed Feb 20, 2008 8:11 pm**

Good shit my dude. Really like your flow and use of multis and you never fall off either.

Posted: **Wed Feb 20, 2008 9:05 pm**

thanks for the feed guys, keep uppin.

Posted: **Thu Feb 21, 2008 2:54 am**

lol good shit homie...real talk

Posted: **Thu Feb 21, 2008 10:21 am**

yeah i liked this your syllabols actually fall off in places of your multies, but other than that it was dope, i liked it, it told the truth and your statements made were real.. nice shit homie

Posted: **Thu Feb 21, 2008 3:38 pm**

This was straight.

No real extensive thought process, but nothing to shabby.

Posted: **Sun Feb 24, 2008 1:48 am**

i thought this was dope for a short piece. multis were straight for the most part and the flow was good. good content to it aswell.

Posted: **Sun Feb 24, 2008 4:13 am**

thanks, hm i dont think i need to say uppin..lol

Posted: **Sun Feb 24, 2008 7:25 am**

for a freestyle it was nice, even if it wasn't it was still koo, u basically just said wat was on ur mind n rhymed... spoke the truth so its hard to hate

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Fighting? Little Freestyle By Khan.

Fighting? Little Freestyle By Khan.