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Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Sat Feb 23, 2008 8:39 pm

DarK GreeN: Arv
WhitE: Bill

While i been-spittin you wrist-slittin, faggot jumpin penis like ya name was RICH SIMMONS
Rockin pink ribbons, on the shoutbox mouth off like you been trippin, see u on rink-slippin
With a mini-skirt n some skates on, im tired of ya lame-bitch so imma make my aim-switch
You droppin love then talk shit like you gotten tough, u touch wit gloves but i enflame-mits
Said that i bite, but not in ya life will u see me cop a line from some other site, I stay realest
Representin while i spray-illest, you whine for some time cuz i'm takin all the play-minutes
This gay's finished, ask around 4 screen names-in-pretend so he can talk AIM-wit-some-men
Emotional, sacrifice lookin stupid 4 attention, makin-threads cuz homework aint-makin-sense,
No respect, like the ho's-expect, phantom's like a ken doll while my flow erects, Dont suspect
You would even see the joke-connect, U slow cuz witta flow so low-in-dept there's no correct.

Callin me a redneck? You're gon hafta see, that Im better than you and ya couldnt be a halfa me
If you begged on your hands and knees, writin slit wrist poems waitin for a cryin heart to feed
And your heartll bleed crimson of red, and when you see me comin to you gon be wishin ya dead
An you keep droppin fishin for cred, ya daddy didnt just beat ya he forced it and was kissin ya head
Wat I said? This aint growth hormone or testesterone, n my guns'll pop n make ya body stop ya gone
Walk through ya door and scream pops is home, so pathetic this cat couldnt pay to cop some dome
Waste of air and space ya life is full of cryin, I keep lookin at your raps and wonderin why ya tryin
To dive in to this game when ya cant even rhyme-in 1 bar, startin beef with me now ya got bad timin
Im finna set my flow into motion and get a win, while you a freak who likes to sit n "put the lotion on the skin"
And this is jus a notion not quite a sin, cause Ill rid the world of you and then go after your next-to-kin

Khan · Post by **Khan** » Sat Feb 23, 2008 9:18 pm

this was nice, ARV i didn't really have a favorite line with you, to be real, this sucked on your part, lol no disrespect intended, but from your other drops this was not impressive at all, there was even a line you did were the multis didnt fully match.

This gay's finished, ask around 4 screen "names-in-pretend" so he can talk "AIM-wit-some-men"1.
Emotional, sacrifice lookin stupid 4 attention, "makin-threads" cuz homework "aint-makin-sense,"2.

1. names-in, doesn't go with with-some.
2.makin-threads, doesn't go with any of the mutlis you already had.
and Aint-makin-sense, didn't go really with anything.

now the only reason im being so hard on your flow cause i like i said, you can do hell of a lot better than this now Wild Bill.

I've read your pass drops and this one i can see improvement, your flow was alot better i like the inner-rhymes and little mutlis you did on the long lines my favorite line by you was this.

Im finna set my flow into motion and get a win, while you a freak who likes to sit n "put the lotion on the skin"
And this is jus a notion not quite a sin, cause Ill rid the world of you and then go after your next-to-kin.

that shit was funny, over all, not a bad read but at the same time it wasn't that great either.

Keep Pushing.

Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Sat Feb 23, 2008 9:23 pm

haha ok mang thanks for the feed.
truly appreciated
This was more of a freestyle on my part.

Uppin

Cee4 · Post by **Cee4** » Sun Feb 24, 2008 1:33 am

this was alrite. nice multis and flow from both of you here. the personals and punchlines were nothin special but thats probably because u already dropped about 100 bars at each other. im kind of tired of reading you 2 dissin each other but it was still a good piece

Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Sun Feb 24, 2008 1:38 am

ur retarded it wasnt to each other.

this just shows, you aint readin the drops

Cee4 · Post by **Cee4** » Sun Feb 24, 2008 2:15 am

well u were dissin someone. the fact that i got it wrong about who u were dissin means the verse was wack then.

on the shoutbox mouth off like you been trippin,

thats what made me think u were dissin Bill coz Bill likes mouthin off in the shoutbox.

Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Sun Feb 24, 2008 2:32 am

lol the verse was wack cuz you didnt read it properly? hahah ok cee my bad.

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Sun Feb 24, 2008 7:27 am

lol@ u Guyz Takin Myne & Cee's Idea..

LadySam · Post by **LadySam** » Sun Feb 24, 2008 8:09 am

this wasnt bad, it flowed quite well i think. some multis were nice in there.

This gay's finished, ask around 4 screen names-in-pretend so he can talk AIM-wit-some-men
Emotional, sacrifice lookin stupid 4 attention, makin-threads cuz homework aint-makin-sense,

And your heartll bleed crimson of red, and when you see me comin to you gon be wishin ya dead
An you keep droppin fishin for cred, ya daddy didnt just beat ya he forced it and was kissin ya head

nice lines.
good to see people collaborating

thaphantom · Post by **thaphantom** » Sun Feb 24, 2008 11:32 am

lmao@them trying to diss on me...

Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Sun Feb 24, 2008 2:30 pm

^^^and succeeding

thaphantom · Post by **thaphantom** » Sun Feb 24, 2008 2:32 pm

not going no where....uppin for more feed i want to see what people got to say bout this..

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Mon Feb 25, 2008 6:01 am

Arv, the first few lines were corny as hell.

After most of it was fire though. I don't have much else to say about that.

Wildbill, not a very effective diss, but it did have a consistent flow. The thoughts
were more lucid than usual to. You wait about a year, and come back and read
some of your other threads. You will be like, ah!, that's pretty decent, but I had no idea.

People elevate so quickly.

Overall it was a better diss than his. I wouldn't be overjoyed in that thought though.

I didn't think, it's cool at all for you guys to just snipe him without warning. But it's rap and it's anything
goes.

Omega Bill · Post by **Omega Bill** » Mon Feb 25, 2008 6:06 am

Thanks for the feed, Plex. Also, he had it coming all he does is talk shit and not back it up.

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Mon Feb 25, 2008 6:14 am

This gay's finished, ask around 4 screen names-in-pretend so he can talk AIM-wit-some-men
Emotional, sacrifice lookin stupid 4 attention, makin-threads cuz homework aint-makin-sense,
No respect, like the ho's-expect, phantom's like a ken doll while my flow erects, Dont suspect
You would even see the joke-connect, U slow cuz witta flow so low-in-dept there's no correct.

Arv's Best point^

And your heartll bleed crimson of red, and when you see me comin to you gon be wishin ya dead
An you keep droppin fishin for cred, ya daddy didnt just beat ya he forced it and was kissin ya head
Wat I said? This aint growth hormone or testesterone, n my guns'll pop n make ya body stop ya gone
Walk through ya door and scream pops is home, so pathetic this cat couldnt pay to cop some dome
Waste of air and space ya life is full of cryin, I keep lookin at your raps and wonderin why ya tryin
To dive in to this game when ya cant even rhyme-in 1 bar, startin beef with me now ya got bad timin

Bills best Point^

Yo both Of yall. Listen Dis Diss Seemed Like a Subliminal At First
Try & Hit Whoeva u Rappin Against Directly, Throw Facts in Dere or Wudeva u Can
Like Meeeth Sayz ( GEEEEEEEET EM) LoL

it Wusnt a bad Diss Towards um Though. We'll See if he Replyz

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