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Red- Arvincible
Blue- Cee4


Let's talk, All this pres. talk and blunderin just got the better of me wonderin
How these streets of life is under sheets of this bed we call the government
THey got the upper-end. and these men were like brothers-then
But now they're the unappreciated congress that is rollin over sleepin on us
And never realizin the measures of the pressures that they keepin on us,
what they leavin-on-us, to be honest they really leanin-on-us
This land's a where-about we live thats' full of people they dont care-about
Ignorin when they hearin-shouts cuz its us they're never ever hearin-out
They're control got people clearin out, they wont let it even-out
They're turnin us all into somethin like slaves that are fearin their masters
Cuz they have us livin disasters, not givin a damn once the bell rang after
Those hypocritical bastards talk about justice with laughter,
Cuz now the game is over, there's nothing anymore worth the fighting for
They're just ignitin worries, so in the end we writin stories of fightin wars
Tired of hearin the cryin mothers n screams, cuz even we wonder n dream
Truth is we livin under their stream, We must end this thunder it seems
Hold ya heads up high and scream, "Fuck the government schemes!"

its a conspiracy, some say theres forces in the world tryna cause disorder
the Illuminati, tryna establsh a new world order to rule across the borders
we got troops in Afganistan, but are they there to be heros and heroines
or is it just all a plan, to control the opium and provide the zeros with heroin
so many theorys and rumours, so many differnt opinions to juggle with
but its a warzone, if it aint the governments then who the fuck smuggles it
Al Gore claims were doomed from global warming, I wish this bitch just relaxes
They say they`ll be no more warnings, its just another excuse to hit us with taxes
It's a Big brother state, governments erectin cameras to try and follow me
U know the worlds gone mad when Tom Cruise is campaining for Scientology
My citys infested with immigrants, it aint personal just give us back our space
Fuckin pricks thinkin the airports a drive through and their gonna blast the place
Coz we wanna be Americas groupies, tryna impress them like a lame ass Stan
Losin in Iraq we wanna blame Tehran, Al Queda cant wait until we flame Iran
Fuck the government, we pay our taxes but get shit back, fuck these shifty whores
For leavin us deprived, savin for pensions when our life expectancy is only fifty four
Their wonderin why we got so many problems, poverty!, It hurts its gonna show
Were all gonna die! fuck it though, When Yellowstone blows whos the first that's gonna go

Word.

I'm impressed by this drop and it's a great expansion of ideas for the scriptures.

I thought, Arvincible's facts were a little more evident. A few conspiracy theories like the opium and heroin
part that I don't agree with, but it gets to a bigger picture. The idea, what are we really fighting the war for.

"we got troops in Afganistan, but are they there to be heros and heroines
or is it just all a plan, to control the opium and provide the zeros with heroin
so many theorys and rumours, so many differnt opinions to juggle with
but its a warzone, if it aint the governments then who the fuck smuggles it "

I say that, despite the fact that I thought c4's ideas were well-developed. Where he was bare on actual facts, he made up for with including the realities of the situation.

"They're control got people clearin out, they wont let it even-out
They're turnin us all into somethin like slaves that are fearin their masters
Cuz they have us livin disasters, not givin a damn once the bell rang after
Those hypocritical bastards talk about justice with laughter"

This was a hard hitting piece overall. It was fun to read. And lyrically it was pretty good.

Keep it up. 8.8/10.

I'd like to see more drops like this.

Hence the reason, I know Illest isn't going "down-hill", because we still have collaborations being made and people putting together their skill to do some cool things, whether it's battling or collaborations. Helping each other with audio, it doesn't matter.

Shut Da Fuck Up Niggah it Wus a Diss. Dis is My Site Bitch RESPECT FACTS...


But now they're the unappreciated congress that is rollin over sleepin on us
And never realizin the measures of the pressures that they keepin on us,

They're turnin us all into somethin like slaves that are fearin their masters
Cuz they have us livin disasters, not givin a damn once the bell rang after


Cuz now the game is over, there's nothing anymore worth the fighting for
They're just ignitin worries, so in the end we writin stories of fightin wars
Tired of hearin the cryin mothers n screams, cuz even we wonder n dream
Truth is we livin under their stream, We must end this thunder it seems
Hold ya heads up high and scream, "Fuck the government schemes!" < Raw Endin..


Ar you Stayed on Concept Real Well, like Plexes Faggot ass Sed ur Facts were more Evident.
you had a Good Amount of Multis but it Ain even Matta the whole Topic wus Raw

CEE4-

we got troops in Afganistan, but are they there to be heros and heroines
or is it just all a plan, to control the opium and provide the zeros with heroin << gduyfgsaduygsdauysa

It's a Big brother state, governments erectin cameras to try and follow me
U know the worlds gone mad when Tom Cruise is campaining for Scientology < LMAO!


When Yellowstone blows whos the first that's gonna go < LOL Not You

you Came Hard u Bastard. i Liked how you Structured ya Flow it Was a Good Read

Over All Dis Wus a Dope Collab

Oh Yeah By Da Way, Vote Hazard Fa President FUCK COMPLEXITY

( LEAVE FEEDBACK On my "YOUS A LOSER" piece)

i liked this collab. It turned out pretty nice


uppin kids

i aree with plex on this one..

But now they're the unappreciated congress that is rollin over sleepin on us
And never realizin the measures of the pressures that they keepin on us,
what they leavin-on-us, to be honest they really leanin-on-us
This land's a where-about we live thats' full of people they dont care-about
Ignorin when they hearin-shouts cuz its us they're never ever hearin-out
They're control got people clearin out, they wont let it even-out
They're turnin us all into somethin like slaves that are fearin their masters
Cuz they have us livin disasters, not givin a damn once the bell rang after

word^liked that the best from Arv

Al Gore claims were doomed from global warming, I wish this bitch just relaxes
They say they`ll be no more warnings, its just another excuse to hit us with taxes
It's a Big brother state, governments erectin cameras to try and follow me
U know the worlds gone mad when Tom Cruise is campaining for Scientology
My citys infested with immigrants, it aint personal just give us back our space
Fuckin pricks thinkin the airports a drive through and their gonna blast the place
Coz we wanna be Americas groupies, tryna impress them like a lame ass Stan
Losin in Iraq we wanna blame Tehran, Al Queda cant wait until we flame Iran

hahaha@the stan line lool,overall both of u dida good job,nice switch up of topics,good shit keep droppin

i read the verse and then read plex's feed and if i were to break it down i couldnt of said it better myself, so hot shit man 8.8/10

Collab was nice.
interesting topic.
Cee outshine arvy boy here abit.
But arv still did nice.
Overall a dope piece. Keep up boys

cheers for the feed