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Liiisten!!


They say cop a gun-a-head if u gunna do like silver Trucks and make runz-fa-bread
leave a nigga "holey" enough a nun-a-cred him gods son 2 be, now son-a-head..

Everythin 2 my Peers-is-new lifes Old 2 me these shoes been on me a year-or-two
same steps, a dame swep anotha BITCH K.O'd his chain kep, still the SAME KICKZ

lame pricks who wanna go (neck 2 neck) like a chain pick cus dere acclaimed sick
ain nothin 2 dis dawg cept straind-tics who dumb as fuc but good 2 give BRAIN QUIC

Go to (the Kids Street) you'll see da ( The kids Street) take whoeva Kiddz-Feet
up-side-down Lyk "Southside Nigga Sup-Ride-clown" yall Sum fake thugz

Who try & act like bill nie but cant take slugz
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Its simple you Lac real Lyrics cause ya Ass Simple n Wack
ur a dot nah a Pimple infac who cant see me like Dimples in Bac..

i got Enuf punches 2 Ben-a-grill & knock u Out like Ben-a-Drill..
Me i Ben-a-Drill now ima Construction Machine (PIPE DOWN) heres (instructions u Fien)

Sit bac Like blacs in tha White Era Dont play Harry Potta go Check da Right Mirra..
See ya Self Fa Wud u Really-Are a Fuckin Scab on My dick Dat Lef me BARELY SCAR'D

again the was dope. lots of wordplay and punchlines as usual. the flow was good here too. i prefer it when u keep the rhyme goin over 2 lines.


same steps, a dame swep anotha BITCH K.O'd his chain kep, still the SAME KICKZ

lame pricks who wanna go (neck 2 neck) like a chain pick cus dere acclaimed sick
ain nothin 2 dis dawg cept straind-tics who dumb as fuc but good 2 give BRAIN QUIC

^^^^^
this was the highlight of the verse

lame pricks who wanna go (neck 2 neck) like a chain pick cus dere acclaimed sick
ain nothin 2 dis dawg cept straind-tics who dumb as fuc but good 2 give BRAIN QUIC

^^the best bar heh

yo this is raw on the wordplay and rhyme scheme.
Keep up the good work, ur only elevating even more.

No point in state'n what was already said you know? but good shit homie

Everythin 2 my Peers-is-new lifes Old 2 me these shoes been on me a year-or-two
same steps, a dame swep anotha BITCH K.O'd his chain kep, still the SAME KICKZ

liked that bar the most^,overall it wuz good,some bars cudda been cleaner but it didnt affect nething in ur piece,stay up

str8 shyt,nothin too impressive.. but it kept my attention for the most part, keep droppin, u improved alot from wat i last remember from when u were just shits n giggles lol..

i think everything that could be quoted was haz, but this was good shit my dude, mos def not ur best shit but i liked it, kept my attention while readin it so ups to yuh

Probably My fave piece from ya.
Your wordplay was better then usual
Flow was nice, but as someone else said id rather u keep Like a standard Bar.
Better Flow.
But who cares the Flow and Structure on This Was Still Nice.
Multis Were nice, a real consistent piece.
Nice work Haz.