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Punchline Prince
Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 7:09 am
by Haz
Your Human Extacy who Impails Teens guess i Gotta "X-X" Like a MALE GENE!
Doms the King Me im The Prince u Got "Chapstick" cus u Wont (Bomb a Thing) - Lip Bomb lol
im Fresh milk ur Sour thats a Olda-Grade Da Milita'll Throw u Out Like SHOULDA BLADEZ!
Think u Can Eat-Me Throw on a Beat-G i'll "End This Battle" Somethin Like a TREAT-T!..
i Easily Pass-Yo-Tex Cus ya Position on illest is Undetermined Like Rell Fias-Co's-SEX!!!
This da Anal Sex Line whoeva wana get beat Ass-Go-Nex (U!?) Turn to Ash-Flow-Pess..
Sequence Tried Be RAIZAS AID but "TOOK OFF HERE" like Somethin he dont need a ( RAIZA BLADE)
im Strtin To Burn & About To SMOKE MASSES cus im "In Focus" Like i put on GHOSTS GLASSES!
Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 7:21 am
by Cee4
Sequence Tried Be RAIZAS AID but "TOOK OFF HERE" like Somethin he dont need a ( RAIZA BLADE)
im Strtin To Burn & About To SMOKE MASSES cus im "In Focus" Like i put on GHOSTS GLASSES!
^^^^
lol
overall i liked this. they were your best bars. especially the first one
Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 7:25 am
by Arvincible
lol these were great lines you mean lip balm though lol
yyou should've put more dude
Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 7:51 am
by Haz
u Know Wut Arv im Gunna Add 4 More Bars
Den Leave Me Feed Aight
Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 8:26 am
by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT
Lip Balm/Bomb was a good concept needs more support...
Example:
Mac Shot Clips Made This "Chap Stick" Around And Get Balmed/Bommed Like Puttin On Lip Gloss
LOL you know where I was going tho, not bad...needs a lil rewording but it was coo man
Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 12:10 pm
by Momeijah
Good Stuff.
Doms the King Me im The Prince u Got "Chapstick" cus u Wont (Bomb a Thing) - Lip Bomb lol
im Fresh milk ur Sour thats a Olda-Grade Da Milita'll Throw u Out Like SHOULDA BLADEZ!
Think u Can Eat-Me Throw on a Beat-G i'll "End This Battle" Somethin Like a TREAT-T!..
i Easily Pass-Yo-Tex Cus ya Position on illest is Undetermined Like Rell Fias-Co's-SEX!!!
These Were My Favourite Lines^ Solid Punches in Each One. Creative With a Nice Flow To it, Which is Basically All u Need For Punchline Pieces But The Multis Were Consistent Throughout Which is a Bonus. Last Bar u Could've Executed a Lot Better, But Good Piece.
Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 12:21 pm
by Haz
Thanks Dom
Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 5:16 pm
by Brah-Vo
Shit was dope.
i Easily Pass-Yo-Tex Cus ya Position on illest is Undetermined Like Rell Fias-Co's-SEX!!!
This da Anal Sex Line whoeva wana get beat Ass-Go-Nex (U!?) Turn to Ash-Flow-Pess..
Sequence Tried Be RAIZAS AID but "TOOK OFF HERE" like Somethin he dont need a ( RAIZA BLADE)
im Strtin To Burn & About To SMOKE MASSES cus im "In Focus" Like i put on GHOSTS GLASSES!
^^^ Those bars were nice as fuck .
I wanna see longer pieces though.
Flow here was smooth and ya punches were very creative.
Props.