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The kid about the green like a Fungis book
like a brand new track trend i " run this loook!"
bring a fishy fiend to the side like i brung this hook
the kid got it like its a flu or plague i dont bring the aspect blue to the page
Cause im proud of money cus i bin crashin into it like its crowd of dummies
never looking at the "bad E " off life never'll allow-in-bummi-E!
i gott a A+ with my battling grade this ain sick enuff i need strt Battling Aids
i Got Beeef in Routine like Cattling Trade so if dey hear im movin dere Tattling..Raids..
ima Strip ya Honey check ha pussy if it Smell Dog kno Automatically "Honey Smac"d Like KELLOGS!
u Suppose To be bigg but i "HURD A FLUKE" i burn dope on c.d & callit smack DVD like murda mook
these doods aint Weight in bits The Truth is they'll "Ly" on da Ground like there on sum satan shit!
you doods think u fly But at ur Prime-are-Wac thats why she ain feeling like ha hands Behind-Ha-Back!

Uh.o.o..

I liked this piece, but not as much as part 1.

Flow was smooth and punches were nice.
An overall consistent piece.

Favo bars:

ima Strip ya Honey check ha pussy if it Smell Dog kno Automatically "Honey Smac"d Like KELLOGS!
u Suppose To be bigg but i "HURD A FLUKE" i burn dope on c.d & callit smack DVD like murda mook

i gott a A+ with my battling grade this ain sick enuff i need strt Battling Aids
i Got Beeef in Routine like Cattling Trade so if dey hear im movin dere Tattling..Raids..

you changed your rhyme structure on this one a bit, i like the first one more cuz the punches hit harder, but this was also a good read.


the kid got it like its a flu or plague i dont bring the aspect blue to the page
Cause im proud of money cus i bin crashin into it like its crowd of dummies

^^funny line,

Ur flow was nice too keep it up "Prince of Punches"

I might just wanna drop a punchline piece myself lol

Return the Fave...Diss-cussin Illest..ur on there alot lol

yeah this was alright decent punches there pretty creative but some dont hit as hard as they could

enjoyed your first bar, took me two reads to get it but it's pretty creative and funny keep droppin.