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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 9:48 pm
by complexity
Scruff McGruff Always Quick Ta Take A Bite Out Of Crime
These Faggots Always Bitin They Even Took A Bite Outta Mine

i'm Sick Of These Faggots That Cant Even Rehearse A Line
Dont Kno Why They Call Him Young Half When His Whole Verse Was Mine

there claiming there dropping the heatand the realest of writers
were stopping the weak this is dedicated to the illest of biters

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My favorite bars, this was good for what it was.

You guys stayed on topic and it had some highlights.

Obviously, this wasn't a piece that took to long, but it was worth reading.

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:42 pm
by MesaR
thanks for the feed complexity, drop us a link of something u wont feed on

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 2:52 am
by Glamtrash
Not bad, taken at face value it was some good shit. Hope ya get your message across lol. My favourite quotes were already mentioned. But sequence, i did really like your closing line.

Good shit guys.

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 5:34 pm
by MesaR
upping for some feed

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 6:01 pm
by Brah-Vo
Lol. Shit was funny.

Both verses were nice

Favo bars:

Scruff McGruff Always Quick Ta Take A Bite Out Of Crime
These Faggots Always Bitin They Even Took A Bite Outta Mine

there claiming there dropping the heatand the realest of writers
were stopping the weak this is dedicated to the illest of biters

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 11:52 pm
by Haz
i Thought Your Concept Was Rappaz Dat Bite?
How Do i Bite Wud Soeva if Anythin u Bite Ekoms Style Like a Mothafuckah.
i'll Leave u Detailed Feed Latah TheGuy

Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 2:31 am
by -TraMaTiK-
JJ ur shit wuz good i member readin a lil bit b4 glad it turned out good n up 2 expectations,these were my fav bars from u

i'll Call You Faggots Chomper Or Maybe Saber Tooth
Even Takin Original Bars Ya Still Cant Raise Tha Routes
i'd Call You Jaws But Ya Teeth Are Missin And Ya Outta Water
You Lames Needa Quit And Never Doubt Tha Slaughter
Just Shut Up And Wait So Ya Can Hear And Listen

nice^

now seq,idk why u feel the need 2 make ur multis bold cuz everyone on here can read,so u shud stop that,but u had some nice bars like these

there talking the trash saying shit like im never forcing-the-rap
caution the gat were rippin these squares like a portion-of-math
we expose the truth this bitch will run he'll never face up to you
they think were dumbbut seeing hazard posts i would belive it to
reply with a thank you shorty on the real there fake and corny
they weight is scrawny bagging rap the only time they take the glory

good shit^


cool lil drop yall

Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 6:33 am
by MesaR
thanks tramatik, but about the bold i just like doing it thanks for the feed

Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 12:01 pm
by ~Symbolikull~
i liked this smooth flow thru out the piece, nice punches and hits in it nice word play and all that shit id give this a 7.5/10 nice for a quik collab.

Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 4:29 pm
by Haz
Scruff McGruff Always Quick Ta Take A Bite Out Of Crime
These Faggots Always Bitin They Even Took A Bite Outta Mine < LMAO NICE SUBLIMINAL!


i'm Sick Of These Faggots That Cant Even Rehearse A Line
Dont Kno Why They Call Him Young Half When His Whole Verse Was Mine

LMAO^^^^ !!!!..

i Liked more Bars but i Dunno LMAO dem Shits Had Me Rollin son..

you had Some Str8 Punches in Dis .
i Feel Like u Threw Wordplay here & Dere Multis..
& Just Clowned Da Shit Outta Dese Niggahz LMAO

i'd Give U Individually a 8/10 J..

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