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5 bar battle
72 hours after check-ins
no hate votes.dick riding. or flipping.

vote cats are:
Personals
punches
flow
structure
wordplay


3 days. This is my check in bruh. G/L Meta

Good luck to you.. Checkin' in.

ey bruh, lets drop after ur battle with hazard. Im really busy right now, and i just want to let u know so i dont keep you waiting...peace

That's cool.. Let me know when, I'm always in battle mode

You come looking for a challenge with some talent? They'll tell ya Arv-has-'em,
My flow makes ya orgasm, so dont throw ''punches'' cuz ill give u arm-spasms!
Elevated, I stay consistent-wit-skill, and committed-2-kill while i'm spittin-to-thrill
i'll get you sittin there all drippin ya ice cream, cuz nigga you aint spittin-for-real*
82-5? u dont at all-sound-slick, n punches dont win it all u clown-prick, fall down-quick
U got no personals, only reason u got wins is u from a wack site called-'Soundclick'
You're just like Orlando, you recycle from site to site and claim a victory-streak,**
Your flow ain't unique, Satan probably banished him back cuz the Demon-is-weak
I kill-by my ill-style, you took a chance to glance at my verse and almost-died!
This demon lies cuz only time this faggot's baby killin is sittin by a homo's-side!***

* For Real/Pharell made "Ice Creams", he's not real so his shit melts.
**anyone can come to a wack site and get 50 wins or so then move on,
thats what u did. ur Illest wins wont come so easy
*** killin- (homocide), baby killin--suckin dick

uppin for ur verse man
lets finish this today

FUCK THE PHILANTHROPHY... Heavy words, I'm CRUSHIN' YOUR HANDS WITH FREES!//
Change your pic!.. I'm so ill The Grim Reaper would die if he TOUCHED HIS PHALANGE TO ME!!//
My PEN ALTERS THE SEA LINE.... Spit sick, PHLEGM HALTS YA WITH BLEAK RHYMES//
Did you forget Multies?!... Just to fuck me with cats this bitch gave CYMBALTA TO FELINES!!//
I'll piss on 'Structure' like a BUM AT A BUILDING'S SIDE... I'm NUMBIN' THE CHILDREN'S HIDES//
Smack you so hard you lose your taste, bud... like I sliced your TONGUE WITH A MILLION KNIVES!!//
This FAGGOT FOE'S RESPECTABLE?!.. Your rep's low like SHAQ WITH SPOKEN DECIBELS//
You asked me to go first! You're scared to drop like pre-teen ACROPHOBIC TESTICLES!!//
You'll lose your SPINE WHEN VETS BANG... I'll leave your RHYMES AND TEXT MAIMED//
You're a rookie! Like choppin X on central US soil... Your LINES ARE X-PLAINED!!//

Vote!

lol i wanted you to go first? uhh thats not true i went first nigga.

good luck anyways

uppin for votes now kids

I'm pretty sure swaying isn't allowed. But uh:

Arvincible wrote:Meta-the-demon


you bout to make like your bitch's booty n get clapped-on
you fakin hard like you walkin around flexin witta strap-on
with that fake ass flow, damn, you're like a-man-made-river
i'll bring u pain through ya brains that the-hand-may-deliver

you can drop on our battle. Ill drop later on man, im at school
and i have my verse at home, so yeahhh

live-battle-vt8184-30.html

lol ok but it wasnt for trying to read ur verse, idk why u waited till i dropped, ur doing the same thing against hazard haha nice strategy.

i had shit to do and u've been on. soo uhh i didnt see why u couldnt drop
but after this there's no more complainin man. lets just see who deserves the win.

Both of you made the call-out. That both of you would drop first given that fact is as understood of a battle rule as no biting. Stop trying to sway shit like I needed to see your shit or something. And yeah, NOW there's no more comments. Cause you made an accusation, I responded and now we're even. Vote up guys.

FUCK THE PHILANTHROPHY... Heavy words, I'm CRUSHIN' YOUR HANDS WITH FREES!//
Change your pic!.. I'm so ill The Grim Reaper would die if he TOUCHED HIS PHALANGE TO ME!!//

Very Nice Vocab .. Make'n Tha Personal Str8 .. Good Bar

My PEN ALTERS THE SEA LINE.... Spit sick, PHLEGM HALTS YA WITH BLEAK RHYMES//
Did you forget Multies?!... Just to fuck me with cats this bitch gave CYMBALTA TO FELINES!!//

Wordplay Was Sick... Make'n A Solid Bar From This

I'll piss on 'Structure' like a BUM AT A BUILDING'S SIDE... I'm NUMBIN' THE CHILDREN'S HIDES//
Smack you so hard you lose your taste, bud... like I sliced your TONGUE WITH A MILLION KNIVES!!//

Coo Bar Could Have Been Set Up Better.. But Its Still Nice Man

This FAGGOT FOE'S RESPECTABLE?!.. Your rep's low like SHAQ WITH SPOKEN DECIBELS//
You asked me to go first! You're scared to drop like pre-teen ACROPHOBIC TESTICLES!!//

Perfectly Executed =]

You'll lose your SPINE WHEN VETS BANG... I'll leave your RHYMES AND TEXT MAIMED//
You're a rookie! Like choppin X on central US soil... Your LINES ARE X-PLAINED!!//

Nice But You Should Have Figured A New Way To Say That Cuz Use'n X Twice Is Mess'n Up Complexity And Creativity... But Still Nice Wit The Wordplay

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Overall Bar Was Like 8.5/10

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You come looking for a challenge with some talent? They'll tell ya Arv-has-'em,
My flow makes ya orgasm, so dont throw ''punches'' cuz ill give u arm-spasms!

I'll Give You Arm Spasms? ... U Should Have Worded It Into A Punch Like;
"I'll Leave Ya Punches Shook, Worse Than Arm Spasms"
Idk Just Some Insight Help..

Any Bar Was Ight Lack'n Alot Tho...

Elevated, I stay consistent-wit-skill, and committed-2-kill while i'm spittin-to-thrill
i'll get you sittin there all drippin ya ice cream, cuz nigga you aint spittin-for-real*

Multies Messed Ya Whole Think'n Up .. The Punch Was There But Worded Weak, Seems Like You Sacrficed Your Punches,Metas,Personals .. For Creativity,Wordplay And Multies
Its Iight Tho I Aint Knockin It.. Im Just Give Constructive Criticism...

82-5? u dont at all-sound-slick, n punches dont win it all u clown-prick, fall down-quick
U got no personals, only reason u got wins is u from a wack site called-'Soundclick'

1st Line You Was Waaay To Forced Wit Ya Multies.. Ya Had A Bad Setup In It
I See What Ya Aim'n At ... But It Just Was'n Strong Enough .. Kinda A Played Concept Too
(You Get Wins From Noob Sites) Hear That Alot

You're just like Orlando, you recycle from site to site and claim a victory-streak,**
Your flow ain't unique, Satan probably banished him back cuz the Demon-is-weak

Only Thing I Was Feel'n Was The Atemp At The Nameplay .. It Was An IIght Form Of Personal But Its Just Not That Hard Hittin

I kill-by my ill-style, you took a chance to glance at my verse and almost-died!
This demon lies cuz only time this faggot's baby killin is sittin by a homo's-side!***

Wordplay Was Nice .. But Not Feel'n The Punch...



baby killin--suckin dick ? .. Naw Bro I Hardly Think Baby Killin = Suckin Dick ...
Are U Say'n Brotha Lynch .. The Baby Killer = A Homo?
LOL ..Say That To His Face



----------------- HANDS DOWN VOTE = DEMON ---------------------

Personals - Demon
punches - Demon
flow - Arv
structure - Demon
wordplay - Demon

Thanks for the votes you guys.. I really appreciate you taking time to drop the feed and whatnot.. Looks like that makes the KO. Good battle Arv... just don't come with the comments about people's verses before voting's done. I coulda just as easily said some stuff about your "got all my wins from a wack site" line... Cause I've battled the best my dude.. lol. SC was once a jungle of beastly battlers. And I'm molded from those days. Props on the battle though. Cool shit.


And yeah Noob, I feel you on the X thing.... I actually meant to say

You're a rookie! Like choppin E pills on central US soil... Your LINES ARE X-PLAINED!!//

but I was in a hurry to post and didn't catch it til afterwards.. Haha. I figured I'd get DQ'd if I edited it.

yeah thats a hot ass change up lol nice