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Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 5:02 pm
by Meta-the-DEMON
An enjoyable read. TGYH, you had a some nice rhyming and shit.. I see your style, and I respect it. My advice to you would be to work on making your multies match more perfectly though.. Like the Throwing stars/ My own bars rhyme.. Ya know, no major complaints.. You just may wanna work on that.
Haz, you got some sharp wordplay man. Probably the most consistent dude I've seen with the wordplay in a while.. I mean you coulda made some stuff tighter but it's not like it was a battle or anything so to just take this piece for what it's worth, dope shit.
Enjoyed the read... Haz I'm still comin' for that ass in our battle though hahaha.. Props yall.
Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 5:06 pm
by Omega Bill
TGYH - Flow was on point, as always, seemed to have mastered. Good multis.
Haz - Like Meta said, wordplay is always at the top of your list and you're getting better with it.
Haz's best line:
Like The Missin link In Igger i'll Put The N-Ta-Dis So we Can Kill Yall & Have illest Remanis..
TGYH best:
Only Time You Faggots Sick is Growin Sars i'm Known Fa Throwin Stars
There's Only One Time Raiza is Nice Thats When He's Bitin My Own Bars
Solid drop. Only problem I have with it is going full force after someone who is 0-12 and trying to elevate. Mentioned Arv a few times, but mainly directed at Raiza.
Besides that, it's good.
Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 5:23 pm
by Kurse
Damn...niggaz stay heavy rippin Raiza.
Seems to be alot more than it's ever been lately. wtf dat boy do to get a target on his back!?
Serious drop though..i like that goon shit.
Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 5:51 pm
by Glamtrash
Regardless of the fact that I disagree with the concept of it....And it's remarkable timing. This was a decent drop from both of you. Haz, your wordplay is getting better with every drop of yours I read. Guy, you brought some sick shit, as always.
i Bring Fame With Guns Only Time Ya'll Fuckin Wit Cats is Tamed Ones
i Already Tamed One...Raiza You Needa Learn How Ta Play Tha Game Son
^^Fav line.
Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 6:00 pm
by Brah-Vo
THough Im cut Like a muhfucka.
Was still a dope piece.
Haz brought his ill wordplay and TGYH brought his punches.
but 2 n 2 together and u have a dope collab (dissin me)
Peace .
Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 8:43 am
by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT
Well I thought Haz could reword a little. And Guy could've came a little more complex. For the most part it was solid, Guy came through with consistant jabs. Haz had some weak stuff, and then went for a couple uppercuts. IF yu gt what im saying...Only thing was some wordplay was a little stretched, not too much...But the way they were used would've drastically improved em
Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 9:13 am
by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT
No Doubt Leave Me Feed On My Joints If You Haven't..Lol You Prolly Did Tho, So Maybe Wait Till Next Time I Drop Sumthin
Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 5:42 am
by Arvincible
LMAO wow look at all the hate! lol jk this shit was funny as fuck!
Way to come back at me, i think imma keep this shit goin, but im not gonna have raiza do it too cuz
im afraid he'll get fucked up even more lol.
great shit i agree with bill considering ur best lines
and TGYH i really like ur flow in this one mang.
Haz u bastard-of-a-son-to-ur-mom ill stab you!! lol way to punch back guys
8/10 for a diss to the A-r-v lol
peace