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I don't care bout rappers, Fuck a free Shyne t shirt that aint how im livin
Free my fuckin brother, its gonna be 8 years before hes gettin outta prison
They`ve stabbed me, they`ve slashed me, no higher power can catch me
No one can match me, fuck God, he aint gonna send no angel to snatch me
I couldn't give a shit, He wouldn't like me anyway, I`ve behaved hardly nice
bitch was a knife, so devilish! If im Uncle Murda then my blades auntie christ
fuck an R.I.P Biggie, I`ll put my lighter up for all four of my grandparents
Fuck rap, I know real people who died chasin them cash in hand payments
Real dudes that's in the street, fuck that bitch that put my uncle 6 feet under
Dead at 23, when he gets out someones gonna make that Prick feel thunder
Theres no heaven i`ll never see him again, i still cant believe that hes missin
Its luck, it aint part of no system, God didn't make my dad go into remission
Doctors n nurses are the heros, not a faggot priest in the pulpit makin a dime
Deliverin us from evil? at funerals I feel like smackin him for wastin my time
Fuck The 10 commandments, bullshit ooze out their mouths like burstin a blister
Claimin we`re all Gods children, shit! I guess that means ive been fuckin my sister



feed will be appreciated. post a link or say what u need feed on and i`ll return the favour

I couldn't give a shit, He wouldn't like me anyway, I`ve behaved hardly nice
bitch was a knife, so devilish! If im Uncle Murda then my blades auntie christ

Doctors n nurses are the heros, not a faggot priest in the pulpit makin a dime
Deliverin us from evil? at funerals I feel like smackin him for wastin my time

these lines were really nice mang

i like the concept and the idea, real strong opinions and emotion put into it
imma rate this a 7/10, keep it coming bruh

thanks for the feed

I couldn't give a shit, He wouldn't like me anyway, I`ve behaved hardly nice
bitch was a knife, so devilish! If im Uncle Murda then my blades auntie christ


Suck fucking wordplay right there. I like that line A LOT.

Theres no heaven i`ll never see him again, i still cant believe that hes missin
Its luck, it aint part of no system, God didn't make my dad go into remission

Nice emotion put in this bar. Liked it.

Doctors n nurses are the heros, not a faggot priest in the pulpit makin a dime
Deliverin us from evil? at funerals I feel like smackin him for wastin my time

I can feel you there.

Fuck The 10 commandments, bullshit ooze out their mouths like burstin a blister
Claimin we`re all Gods children, shit! I guess that means ive been fuckin my sister

Emotion and humor in that last line, haha.

Good shit man. Pretty detailed, good worplay and good flow. I liked this drop quite a bit. Not a hugely memorable piece, you've set a high bar for yourself though with past drops. I'd rate it a 7.5/10.

"Sins have become Habit" is something I would like feed on.

Wdf Why Noone Gave u Feed lmfao


I couldn't give a shit, He wouldn't like me anyway, I`ve behaved hardly nice
bitch was a knife, so devilish! If im Uncle Murda then my blades auntie christ


u Coulded Worded Dat Shit betta. But da Uncle Murda Concept wus Witty still


Deliverin us from evil? at funerals I feel like smackin him for wastin my time
Fuck The 10 commandments, bullshit ooze out their mouths like burstin a blister
Claimin we`re all Gods children, shit! I guess that means ive been fuckin my sister

LMAO@ Dat "guess that means i've Been fuckin My Sister"
I Liked Dat Shit Right Dere..

The "Fuck etc" Concept Wus Cool.
Da Thing is u Aint Really Come Dat Strong in Dis Piece
it Seems like u Half Ass'd Da Shit outta it.
i Could be wrong

Get Active Again..

Keep Droppin..