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were toy soldiers

Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 9:15 am
by -TraMaTiK-
heres a lil collabo viral and i did for fun,nuthin 2 serious just wanted'ta do a lil somethin so check it out

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6355876

Beat by:Eminem
Recorded by:Tramatik & Viral
Mixed by:Viral & mastered by DJ
also thanks 2 dj for clearin my vocals up a bit

Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 9:31 am
by ~Symbolikull~
tram you started off strong, then jus lost the flow like half way thru and jus never really picked back up, viral the beginnin was dope then it fell of for a second then picked right back up thought you kept strong thru out though

Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 5:11 am
by Haz
Ya Flow Was Strait Fa da most Part Matik..
im Sayin U Coulda Put a Lil More Emotion Into Ur Verse
& Like sorta Raised da Pitch Ov ya Voice Fa Dis one. jus So its a Lil Different

Viral u Did Pretty Str8 Yaself 2... Ya Flow wus Good in da BEgginin
it Sorta Fell Off Den u Pickd it Up.. Lyrics From Both Were Str8

Overrall for a Quick Piece Put Togetha Dis Wus Str8..

Keep Doin Yall

Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 5:29 am
by Viral
thanks for da feed yall..much appreciated


UPPPIIIINNN!!!

Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 10:22 am
by Ambiguous Realm
haha i dunno tramatik sounds funny, but its koo haha, fell off a few times, but got back on it, so it was koo,

even with the vocal changes on ursas well it still sounded like u, u did it more eminem style which was kinda obvious to me since if i could compare u to n e one that'd be it haha,


good shit tho from both of u, think without the vocal effect it would've been better but that's just my opinion

Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 3:44 pm
by Viral
UPPIN FOR FEEDD!!!

Posted: Thu Mar 20, 2008 5:05 am
by Glamtrash
It's cute. As previously stated, you both did fall off, Viral, you recovered relatively quickly. Vince, you needta work on your flow guy. But you're improving, just keep at it, you'll be aright.

Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 9:51 am
by HKX
i heard dis one at viral's lol i think if ya'll re-recorded da shit it would sound better not bad tho lyrics were straight