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Thinking of something but you're spitting out nothing
Sinking turns to frontin, cause you're fallin offa suttin
Callin for some cuttin, but you're blown like you're nuttin
Beats have got me laughin, think ya got a hot track n'
Thinkin ya crackin on a level, but ya duck when metals clappin
Talk like ya pistol packin, musta escaped the subliminal deal tho
Cause youve been layin real low, like ya scared of a real fo'
But its the net, so, youll keep flappin ya gums while Im stabbin you son
You wouldnt be grabbin no gun, youd be whinin sayin "this shits for fun"
Homie you better run, cause a lot real cats will have you lyin on ya back
While you cryin to relax, n they tryin sit back, before ya get ya shit smacked
And lyrically slapped, talk is cheap even fromma kid whod get his shit jacked
Get wig ripped and his lid slipped away from his skull fromma blade that aint dull
A raid ya cant call, ya boys wont be there cause they high on midol, ya real tall
Talkin through a monitor, with ya fake emo moniquer, but ya real small poppin herb
Put ya head on the pavement and be stompin curb, cause ya gonna be chompin earth
Stop your hurt, sever ya interior aterties, you big now but this diss your so small to me
You call to be, looked at, noticed, bring reality into focus, ye aint good n you know this
You show fits, of rage on the net, like your lifes all set, and you like to strife to be a vet
Cant be like the rest, so stick to the chamber n stay outta the threads cause this free says

You'll wind up Lyrically Dead

Quick little something to break the writers block. Feed it.

This was a really good piece... You got a little violent.. LOL... good shit man...

Only part I think you really need to work on is to avoid doing this this thing...


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But you got some good lyrics so keep em comin!

Good shit? This was my style like years ago...bullshit ass rappin...how many lines are you going to re-use or cop off someone else...get the fuck outa here wit' fake shit...i ain't tryin' to make rap my life....music's my life period....and if you say i suck...then you're not a music person....yall feed off hate...what would yall do with out it? NOTHIN...
But being real wit' you...had some nice pieces...very very few...maybe 2 but it's kool

Your a FUckin HATER
Son Wud Style Do u Have? Do u See ya Style Now
LMAO Ur All Ova Da Place...


Leave u Feed Tonite homie

I'm a hater..haz get outa here..you can't even spell one line correct in ur raps...i'm still tryin' to capture myself anyways..so my shit might be sloppy..and so what...but if u can leave dumb comments like this...leave the nigga some feed

Phantom, this wasn't directed at you, lol. Also, if you're gonna say I steal lines please give some proof. You can ask Haz, I was showin him that as I was typin it, how could I steal lines? Come on now, son. Making statements like that atleast back it up instead of just talking just to talk.

But yeah, I told you before you're not worth my time cause you can't respond with anything worth reading anymore. If you think this was directed at you, pull your head outta your ass.

I ain't say it was directed at me..

Thanks for the feed TGYH and Panama, by the way, forgot to say thanks.

ok girls hold ur ponytails n shut the fuck up,ne motha fuckin way bill

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thing HAS 2 go,it makes ur verses look sloppy as fuck,but 2 be honest this wasnt the greatest,its like u went from building multis 2 back 2 basics again within ur pieces,idk its weird..but yea this wasnt as good as ur other i must admit but not bad,the stretched bar thing iz definetly annoying and u needa work on it lemme see if i can give u an example usin ur own shit,

Talkin through a monitor, with ya fake emo moniquer, but ya real small poppin herb
Put ya head on the pavement and be stompin curb, cause ya gonna be chompin earth

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now mine

Talkin through a monitor,ya fake emo moniquer
but ya real small poppin herb
Put ya head on the pavement
be stompin curb, cause ya gonna be chompin earth

see the difference how it looks easier 2 read n shit?not the best cuz its not my piece but u get the gist,keep droppin tho man

Yeah, I got you, this was just something quick I typed up trying to break a writers block, like I said I was sending it to Haz in pieces over AIM as I was typing it and then I just threw it all together, haha.

My other drops aren't gonna be like this, they'll be structured and have good multis and such. Like how Respect and Sins have become Habit was.

Thanks for the feed.

Wild Bill wrote:
Homie you better run, cause a lot real cats will have you lyin on ya back
While you cryin to relax, n they tryin sit back, before ya get ya shit smacked

You show fits, of rage on the net, like your lifes all set, and you like to strife to be a vet
Cant be like the rest, so stick to the chamber n stay outta the threads cause this free says

You'll wind up Lyrically Dead

Quick little something to break the writers block. Feed it.

^^^i didnt like those lines, they didnt hit hard or connect at all..


yeahh this went from a stroll in the park to a walk through hell lol
i agree with Panama about the structure, cuz it really takes the flow away without some balance
Other than that, you delivered the message and pwned about half the site lol
ur getting better at attacking people, maybe u shud hit battlegrounds again.
good shit, keep it comin nikka

peace

oh yeah...just ignore Phantom, ur the only one left on this site that seems to give him any attention anymore.

Word.

You took some nice little shots at the micz man.

Keep it up.

Dopest diss uve dropped

Thanks for the feed Raiza, Tram, Plex, and Arv. It's appreciated.