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vert earp i gone wyatt
bibles closed my psalms violent
it'll be over soon shhhhh.. stay calm, quiet
damn it why you still screamin like bomb riots
cuz them goons got the nine guidin ya like palm pilots
til ya lips dry n gone violet wit grips you aint seen im on spy shit
rotten wit envy ya gangs green come on try it
multiply and divide it in the street i eat faster than rags after ramaden diets

This was nice for your first drop here. Showed decent multis and punches along with a pretty good flow. Only thing Id have to say work on structuring a little more and make your drops a little longer.

Keep droppin.

i agree with billy boy, not bad for someone new

good concept of multies, but the lines start to stretch, which i do alot too when im not taking my time
punch in last bar was decent but pretty simple

overall good job man

welcome and decent verse

u look like u have potential of being very creative in ur lines,
u just need a bit of touching up on it and itll help up ur skills.