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Punchlines
Wordplay
Multis
Flow
Metaphors
Personals..

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Punchlines
Wordplay
Multis
Flow
Metaphors

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Proph'll MURK-ME?!-SHIT Dis JERK-HE-SHIT & Aint Able 2 Hang like PERKY-TITS!!
Haz Roc Wen CRACK RAP Dis "Chicken'll get Rolld on" Like a SNACK WRAP

on illest u in Debt no1'll Give dat "Face-sum-Cred" In Dis Race-u-Dead
in Case-u-sed U Betta Den Haz Gettin Sliced by da neck Wen ur PLACED-A-HEAD!

Lil Nigga its Plain-n-Simple ya Lame-n-Simple Ur Like a Dame-Wid-Dimples
Standin Wid NO WEIGHT, u Get No Money Dis "SCRUB'll" Drain-ya-Pimples!!

u High like a Boss-a-Count u Need 2 More years 7 Times 3 Equalz ya LOSS-A-MOUNT
Rearange ya Room i'll "Posture-ya-Couch" Afta a Can Ova ya Head Like OSCAR DA GROUCH

Why Should I Even SLAY-DUN?.. He Aint "A... LOT" At all Like a Fuckin Drive WAY-SON!
Broke Ass Nigga Its FUNNY-U-GIVE a Vibe Like u Livin fa Money wen u Dont got MONEY-2-LIVE! (EAZI)


*7 Times 3..
He Got 7 Wins ina Year..
lol Enuff Said

Punchlines - Hazard
Wordplay - Hazard
Multis - Tie - Both had a good amount of multis
Flow Tie - No bar flowed with the next, both had good flow in each individual bar
Metaphors - Hazard

Vote Haz.

Prophet - Some of your punches, weren't punches. You repped yourself more than 3 times instead of constantly attacking Haz. That hurts a lot of people. I think you should have focused more on constantly attacking Haz and leaving him black and blue instead of getting your name up.

N you'd think he was into besiatlity, cuz he got fucked by Mare not once-but-twice!//* - Proph, that bar was sick and has good wordplay, make all your bars live up to that kinda of punch and wordplay combo.

You guy matched multis both had quote a few, same with flow, I explained that in the cats.

Wordplay Haz got easily, had a lot more wordplay and his punches hit quite a bit harder.

Haz leads 1-0.

Uppin Votes

Punchlines- Proph
Wordplay- Haz
Multis- Hazard..i think this is what proph needs to work on...
Flow- Prophet
Metaphors- Hazard
Personals- Prophet, haz didnt really have any.

There's six cats, but i think IMO that Haz Hit a lot harder outside of the cats...

Vote: Hazard

Theres 5 Cats
Take Personals out..

You'll get scarred battling-P, ya rhymes are fragile-n-weak, no1 thinks this dunce-is-nice//
N you'd think he was into bestiatlity, cuz he got fucked by Mare not once-but-twice!//*
This bar is nice. Good wordplay. Multis and punch. I liked the mare/beastiality bit. I had a punch like that ready for when I was supposed to battle Nightmare.

I'll easily son-this-dyke, stop acting gangsta, ur never keepin the heat-u-whore//
N i ain't talking bout being assaulted by travel equipment when I say he got beat-by-Or/Oar!//**
Never liked this. The bar was solid enough but the punch at the end was not good

Come step to best-u'll-fall, u ain't a threat-at-all, I eat wack raps, so ur spits is my-grub//
Dudes talkin bout how he cool in the streets, but u couldn't be a 'fly fuck' if u joined the mile high-club!//
Alright. You got the right idea with this but the punch just didn't work for me

Homie ya wack I'm nice, tryna intimidate P, but ur disses toward me don't scare-me-mayne//
U ain't blessed wit skill, last time I heard 'Hazard was dope' some1 got cancer from dat Mary-jane!//
Hmm im not too keen on the punch line. Again flow and multis were solid

Stop actin hard, u ain't got gats-or-chedda, Its obvious ma raps-is-betta,I could slay-this-frail-ho//
Tryna to make noise, but only time I hear HA is when me and my homies are watching da Dave-Chappelle-show!//
Alright

Overall the verse was solid. Nothing more. Your flow was pretty good and you had decent multis throughout the verse. The punches didn't really do it for me. The first one was dope the rest I can see what you were attempting but they just didn't come off.




Proph'll MURK-ME?!-SHIT Dis JERK-HE-SHIT & Aint Able 2 Hang like PERKY-TITS!!
Haz Roc Wen CRACK RAP Dis "Chicken'll get Rolld on" Like a SNACK WRAP
I like trhe perky tits bit. wasn't feelin the snack wrap bit.

on illest u in Debt no1'll Give dat "Face-sum-Cred" In Dis Race-u-Dead
in Case-u-sed U Betta Den Haz Gettin Sliced by da neck Wen ur PLACED-A-HEAD!
Not feeling this bar. Poor wordplay/punch. Flow was nice and you had good multis

Lil Nigga its Plain-n-Simple ya Lame-n-Simple Ur Like a Dame-Wid-Dimples
Standin Wid NO WEIGHT, u Get No Money Dis "SCRUB'll" Drain-ya-Pimples!!
Again the punches were crap BUT the multis were fuckin dope and this bar flowed real good

u High like a Boss-a-Count u Need 2 More years 7 Times 3 Equalz ya LOSS-A-MOUNT
Rearange ya Room i'll "Posture-ya-Couch" Afta a Can Ova ya Head Like OSCAR DA GROUCH
The 1st line was dope. Good personal.
The second line is laughable and not in a good way. “Posture ya couchâ€

Ur Corny dawg..

3-0..
Some Update Dis K.O.

im "corny"? lol

haha what u gonna say next- "suck a dick niggah"? - thats your favourite one right?

same old shit. somebody close this battle and update Hazards urban dictionary

*closed and updated*