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Piece I never finished, might get around to finishing it later.

Love my life for whats given to me
Love the people that worth livin for me
Cause they keep me writing in my spare time
When Im not fightin with my bare mind
When Im not strugglin to earn a rare dime for me
Some of the things in life arent free
But the best are but people cant see
Cause they're blinded by money
N they binded by summa these
Sins in life that will tear at your whole
Demons that will scare morals and test my role
But it wont stop me because god has blessed my soul
And dressed my cold, body with wrappings from old
Got shelter and meals, I got helpers and wheels
I got what it takes to cast away fake n live real
Some people steal, but what I have I earned
And Ive learned, that it only takes a split second to get burned
And Ive yearned for power and waited for my world to get turned
But that didnt happen n some people only live for about an hour
But I live in the minute, because it only takes a second to end it

Sins in life that will tear at your whole
Demons that will scare morals and test my role
But it wont stop me because god has blessed my soul
And dressed my cold, body with wrappings from old
Got shelter and meals, I got helpers and wheels
I got what it takes to cast away fake n live real

liked that part alot^,ur flow has gotten ALOT better man,and ur use of multis iz improvin,keep droppin homie

Thanks for the feed.

Wait till you see my next drop, taking a lot of time with this next one. I wish I coulda had time to finish this piece, but if I start writing I can't really stop and go back and pick up the flow and where I left off.

Word, this was definitely good man.

You captured your emotions better than you have in previous drops, I think.

Keep it up.