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Now I Try And Drop The Heat But It Never Works So Get The Fuck Out Of Here
Slow The Music Down, Stop The Beat So These Haters Can Hear Me Loud And Clear
And Your To Late Stopping Me You Can Hate Cause Lyrically You Anit As Hot As Me
Rapping's My Turf, Not Yours So I'll State My Property Like This Was A Game Of Monopoly
I'm Respected, You Spit Lame Iv'e Neglected Your Sick Claim Bullets Projected With Quick Aim Been Elected A Vet Mayne Cause Ive Perfected This Text Game
Now You'll See The Hot Watch When My Shit Drop There's No Lucky Brakes
Bitches Be Playing Hop Scotch The Only Time There HIP HOPYou Fuckin Fakes
Because You Haters Are Nothing, Get Out Of My Face, Before I Smack Your Melon Open
This Pussys Choking, These Bars So Fucking Gangster, There Crack Like A Felon Wrote It!

I'm always quick to read your punchline drops because although they are short, they don't have the feel of something is missing.

"I'm Respected, You Spit Lame Iv'e Neglected Your Sick Claim Bullets Projected With Quick Aim Been Elected A Vet Mayne Cause Ive Perfected This Text Game
Now You'll See The Hot Watch When My Shit Drop There's No Lucky Brakes
Bitches Be Playing Hop Scotch The Only Time There HIP HOP You Fuckin Fakes"

My favorite bars.

Lmao i Knew This Shit Was By Sequence Just From Looking at The Title. 'Anit' lol

Also The Only Punchlines i Saw in This Drop Were Either Played Or Basic as Hell.

Bitches Be Playing Hop Scotch The Only Time There HIP HOPYou Fuckin Fakes

^ur Fuckin Kiddin Me Right?

I'm Respected, You Spit Lame Iv'e Neglected Your Sick Claim Bullets Projected With Quick Aim Been Elected A Vet Mayne Cause Ive Perfected This Text Game

^Best Part Of The Drop, Because it Flowed Well.

Work On ur Punches, Because They Suck, Honestly.

Yeah Thats True Dom
I Dont Know Where Plex is Comin From Sayin Dis a Punchline Drop
But Everyone Has There Own opinion

I'm Respected, You Spit Lame Iv'e Neglected Your Sick Claim Bullets Projected With Quick Aim Been Elected A Vet Mayne Cause Ive Perfected This Text Game
^ Wus the Best part of the Drop


This Pussys Choking, These Bars So Fucking Gangster, There Crack Like A Felon Wrote It!
^ Wasnt a Good Bar Seq, i Dont think u Shulda Finished ya Drop like dat

Rapping's My Turf, Not Yours So I'll State My Property Like This Was A Game Of Monopoly
^ This wus ok nothin Impressive, Sorta Basic if u Get where im Comin From.

Bitches Be Playing Hop Scotch The Only Time There HIP HOPYou Fuckin Fakes
^ Sorta Wus Expected when u Sed Dat "Hop scotch" , it Wus a Decent Line though

Overall This wus Strait
i've Seen you Drop Betta, The flow Wus Decent Didnt Really See Punches Or wordplay like dat
Ya Multis Wus Decent 2

Hey at least he's trying. Overall this wasn't horrible kid, you just need to work out the kinks.

The best bit of this is clearly...

I'm Respected, You Spit Lame Iv'e Neglected Your Sick Claim Bullets Projected With Quick Aim Been Elected A Vet Mayne Cause Ive Perfected This Text Game

Keep at it kid, you'll be aright.

yo nigga shit was sick dawg like da punches on dis shit u got off like how u came off on dis nigga

I agree, I liked it - didn't think it was all that, but it was good. It started out pretty wack in my opinion, but u stepped your game up with this line:

'm Respected, You Spit Lame Iv'e Neglected Your Sick Claim Bullets Projected With Quick Aim Been Elected A Vet Mayne Cause Ive Perfected This Text Game

Could've pulled the hop scotch line different, to implement and underline your point, but work on finishing off your punches, cause a lot of em got potential, but u don't manage to like top the first line, u try to hard sometimes - which makes it seem wrong, or kinda basic.. liked the ending tho, ur improving with em multies.. four-worded multies are impressive.. keep your game up Seq!