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...Quick Keystyle

Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 1:06 pm
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
..Look
Some Niggas Finna be a Bunch of ate Clowns,
Throw`em Off Tha Throne and Take Crowns ..
I Don't Play Now, Touch Niggas City Like Grey Hound,
Dom Threw Some Punches But They Looked Like Hopkins in Tha 8th Round ..
..Lame ass Verses Say On a Job ya Bitch
..British Bastard Got a Bloody Flow?.. i`ll Slob ya Spits ..
Ya Raps is a Gob Of Shit ..When I Came Back This White Kid Rode Rell Like He On Rob & Big ..
..Greatness in mah Lines Not Hard to Miss ..
I`ll Scar ya Ribs ..Tha Same Way a Emo Teen Scar They Wrist ..
..You Below Mah Level Papertowels Couldn't Help You Pick it Up ..
I`ma Grip This Pump Then Hit This Chump ..He Got an Ego But even Shit Gets Flushed ..
...Don't Reply after This ..i`ll Grab Tha Hands and Clap ya Bitch ..
Leave You Missin in Action Quick,
Keep Throwin Shots, You`ll See 'Sequence Drops' Like i`m Knockin Ova Tha Kid You Rappin Wit ..

Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 1:23 pm
by Haz
lol The Flow Was Sick Son..


Greatness in mah Lines Not Hard to Miss ..
I`ll Scar ya Ribs ..Tha Same Way a Emo Teen Scar They Wrist ..
..You Below Mah Level Papertowels Couldn't Help You Pick it Up ..
I`ma Grip This Pump Then Hit This Chump ..He Got an Ego But even Shit Gets Flushed ..

^^ That shit lol Wus Nice Niggah

Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 1:31 pm
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
...Yeah i`m on Mah Sidekick ..
So it Looks Kinda Weird ..Lol
But Umm
Good Lookin Out Tho

Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 2:03 pm
by JayGunna
pretty good flowed well couple clever lines

keep it up...

Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 7:32 pm
by Momeijah
u Can Tell it Was a Keystyle And ur a Bit Outta Practice, But For What it Was it Was Good.

Dom Threw Some Punches But They Looked Like Hopkins in Tha 8th Round ..

^That Line Probably Stood Out To Me The Most, Best Punch in The Drop.

Some Lines Fell Off, Some Were Cleverly Worded Like:

..British Bastard Got a Bloody Flow?.. i`ll Slob ya Spits ..

..You Below Mah Level Papertowels Couldn't Help You Pick it Up ..
I`ma Grip This Pump Then Hit This Chump ..He Got an Ego But even Shit Gets Flushed ..

Decent Flow Throughout Etc.

ill Reply Later Sometime, But im Done Talking Shit To u. im Still Gnna Call u Wack in My Disses, And i Still Don't Like u, But im Just Gnna Keep it Lyrical Since This is Gnna Be Like My Last Rapping Period Before i Call it a Day, ive Been Over The Shit For Too Long Now. Regardless, ur Still a Dope Punchline Rapper And it's Good To See u Back But i Wnna See Less Bitching And More Talking Through ur Rhymes.

With That Said, im Gnna Kick ur Ass.

Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 5:01 am
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
You`ll Never Kick Mah ass ..
But GoodLooks On Tha FB ..