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A Collab Verse I Did...Some Simple Shit

Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 2:08 pm
by JayGunna
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Cant Hang Wit The Vets…You'll Die…I Aint Makin A Threat/
I Tear Down Like Perspiration…But For You Im Not Even Breakin A Sweat!!!//Wordplay Ouch
Hatin My Text ..Dont Think Jay Is The Best.. …Then Im Saying Whos Next?/
Make You Throw Up Blood And Leave You Crip…But Don't Be Changin Ya Set!!!//
I Blasted Several..You'll You Need More Skills Than Expert To Pass This Level/
Have You Blazin..Im Satan…
To Get The Best Of Me You'll Need More Than STD's To Clap This Devil!!!//
Better Stash Ya Bezels..These Niggas Fruity Give These Faggots Pebbles/
The Last To Settle..These Dikes Tryna Get Off..So I'll Give There Ass Some Metal!!!//(Dildo)
And Those Kats That Act Smooth…Will Get Clap With The Mac Too/
Jay's Lyrics Make You Fill Shitty All Over Similar To Crackhead Bathrooms!!!//
And Ya Dad Will Get Clap Too...Turn His Back Into A Cashew/
But If He Already Dead…R.I.P…But I'll Still Smack Him With His Damn Tomb!!!//
So Don't Start With No Shit…Cause Jay Is As Hard As It Gets/
So Sick..My Lyrics A Maze (amaze) People..You Can Get Lost In This Bitch!!!//
Im Straight Tossin Ya Scripts ..Damn Im Getting Exhausted You Bitch/
You Dickheads Stink...Naw Real Talk You Fucking Garbage And Shit!!!//


Let It Be Known...
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Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 2:30 pm
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
Lmfao! ..
Sick ass Verse ..
Wordplay On Point ..
Multies Was Nice ..
Good Drop

Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 7:38 pm
by Momeijah
I Tear Down Like Perspiration…But For You Im Not Even Breakin A Sweat!!!//

Dope^

Make You Throw Up Blood And Leave You Crip…But Don't Be Changin Ya Set!!!//

Dope Again^

To Get The Best Of Me You'll Need More Than STD's To Clap This Devil!!!//

Another Good Line^

Those Lines Stood Out To Me The Most, it's Nice Having Another Punchline Rapper Here Because i Like Reading Punchline Drops Lol. Good Flow Although a Couple Of Lines Were Choppy, Multis Were Consistent, And u Have Some Nice Wordplay. Was This Directed at Anyone Or Was it Just a Random Diss? Either Way Good Shit u Have a Lot Of Potential Here, 8/10.

Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 9:29 am
by JayGunna
Word Thanks...Nah This Was No Diss...