Hip Hop Forum

starting part of a song soon to be made.

patience im patient but achin
all the hearts you're breakin
all the minds you're faking
all the times you make me
wanna die, you make me wanna cry
cause baby you and i
were greatly true but i
cant survive this live
without my pride
cause life without love
will lead to suicide
and i despise all the times
you filled me in with lies
but on the good side
you made me realise
that ive made a mistake
of eating your bate
and weaving my fate
from decieve and hate

this is the only shit ive seen u drop so i cant give much feed back as much as elevation goes

but this was a nice one
the flow went very smoothly

my favorite line:

"cause life without love
will lead to suicide"