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Supreme Supremacy ft Kurse and Viral

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Supreme Supremacy ft Kurse and Viral

Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

peep it and let me know what yall think...

leave a link and ill return the favor
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Dead Silence »

vocals sound so much better from last time i heard you.
lyrics are on point.
kinda cant understand you tho.
flow kinda gets off

kurse
more understandable
flow grade a

viral
same ass vioce change it up
lyrics are holding it down
nice ending verse

overall

8/10

good job
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

appreciate the feed guys, if you leave a link ill hit you back for the feed as well
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by - Mutual - »

nice track
everyone did brilliant in my opinion
keep em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by Viral »

LOL same ass voice? I'll make sure I get. A voice changer haha. Thanks for da feed to those of u who left feed. N da rest of u who listened but didn't leave feed....thanks for bein lazy LOL....19 views n 3 feeds. I think ghost deserves sme more feed than that. I mean its his first n prolly his last song.... Orrr is it??? Haha
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Post by HKX »

yo i heard dis shit at virals da last time i was at his crib lol shit is dope my nigga lol i even asked viral 2 ask u if i could jump on it and if my cousin g could jump on it as well and u said yea i guess we gonna be on da remix but dis shit was sick nice not bad homie
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

appreciate the feed HKX yeah i didnt think yall was gettin on it so we jus dropped it
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by HKX »

shit its all good no biggie homie i got u tho lol
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Post by Omega Bill »

Yo, I left you feed on your verse when you sent it to me over AIM.

Whole track is dope through and through. You layed it down real well, and Kurse and Viral added that special touch to it by layin down their verses too it to. Shits nice.

It woulda been nice to have seen you drop more audios cause I think you coulda been real good on Audio if you stuck with it.

Nice track, man. Hopefully one day you'll drop some more.

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Post by Gutta »

Whole song was dope bruh, i liked your verse alot and the second dude i think it was Kurse flowed pretty fuckin good to the beat it was legit. I liked the firm beat u used 2, good shit yall
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