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Freestyle

Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 7:50 am
by thaphantom
I'll minded, Still findin, Time to spit, even though i've been off a grip.
I've been grindin, I've been trying, To find a way through obstacles and shit.
Nothin' too deep, Just key'in a free, No back spaces either u like or dont like who cares if u feelin me.
Sloppy yes but who gives a 'freak' you're like 'a leak' all i hear is air when you speak.
Really you should step-a-side, Before you get left-to-die.
Or I could deck-your-eye, Leave you wit' a black ring around ya left-eye.

Ok done short oh well. posts what u want. reply if u want. just bored. peace

Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 12:40 pm
by Omega Bill
To be completely honest, you have gotten better in your absence. Some of your flow chops up here and there, only thing to really work on because vocabulary.

Keep droppin.

Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 9:30 am
by complexity
"I'll minded, Still findin, Time to spit, even though i've been off a grip.
I've been grindin, I've been trying, To find a way through obstacles and shit. "

Pretty simple man, it's not HORRID for a freestyle, but you could do a little better.

It's still good to see you trying and dropping.