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So I typed this up in 4 minutes and didnt change a single thing to it, lol. I write weird shit when I don't sleep.

You cant fight a spirit, you can barely even hear it
When your almost near it, you will have to fear it
Demons can sear shit, like your medulla on the wall
Be a fool to crawl, jump out the tiles splatter DNA in the stall
Reappear when its time, for a victim out of line
Split them from the spine, combine soul with mine
Ringing in ears is a sign, Bloody Mary dont be mean muggin her
Buggin er, fed up with kids grabbing you by your jugular
Tuggin her arms away from your throat, cant fight a ghost
Her arms are invisible, imaginable being actin invincible
Permissable entry through mirror should be inadmissable
Shiftable creature, went from gates of hell to the teacher
Just a leacher off the devil turn her victim to a screacher
Preachers bless your home, then test your bones
Possess your dome, when she ate your moans
Slammed her breast into your chest overtook ya anatomy
Saddens me to know, that you were almost so glad to meet
The one who didnt exist, now you're just a name on a list
Of ones who pissed off, n got their body turned to skin cloth
Retract back to her hell loft, before she gets to tell off
The young kids who dont believe their troubles is scary
When they say a name 5 times

Bloody Mary Bloody Mary

I like that...

it's like a newer...mutli-like...rap-version of the childhood story of bloody Mary.
It's a good concept for a text cuz it's different.

Alot of times you read things in these scriptures and sometimes after a while...they all begin to look the same. So when sumthin different comes along it's really refreshing. Good drop pimpin.

Ringing in ears is a sign, Bloody Mary dont be mean muggin her
Buggin er, fed up with kids grabbing you but your jugular
Tuggin her arms away from your throat, cant fight a ghost
Her arms are invisible, imaginable being actin invincible
Permissable entry through mirror should be inadmissable
Shiftable creature, went from gates of hell to the teacher
Just a leacher off the devil turn her victim to a screacher
Preachers bless your home, then test your bones
Possess your dome, when she ate your moans
Slammed her breast into your chest overtook ya anatomy
Saddens me to know, that you were almost so glad to meet

fav part homie^good shit lol@mean muggin her tho,good flow too keep it up man nice concept as kurse said n yo leave some feed on hey cupid in the chamber if ya wuddd

Yessir. I'll get to that today for sure.

Thanks for all the feed.

Shiftable creature, went from gates of hell to the teacher
Just a leacher off the devil turn her victim to a screacher
Preachers bless your home, then test your bones
Possess your dome, when she ate your moans
Slammed her breast into your chest overtook ya anatomy
Saddens me to know, that you were almost so glad to meet
The one who didnt exist, now you're just a name on a list
Of ones who pissed off, n got their body turned to skin cloth
Retract back to her hell loft, before she gets to tell off
The young kids who dont believe their troubles is scary
When they say a name 5 times

Bloody Mary Bloody Mary


I liked it the most from there on. This was pretty cool to read. Good work dude.