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GOD's GIFT??

Posted: Sat May 17, 2008 9:45 pm
by - Mutual -
now i'm here to discuss,this matter with us
i mean evrbody thinks that they god's gift but who truly is,
is a question i'm gonna explain wit this
only one verse to need to reverse that stank curse lets see who ranks first
plex i aint read nothin lately,HKX is gettin in late see in a while good is wot he gonna be
duc3 write some aiight shit through veterancy
you dont believe i wouldnt mention me
in my own rnymes and lines scheme let me get back to the theme
gods gift nothin but a dream arv buildin himself up real good it seems
that kurse is tryna join in wit us many would say its annoying enough
that dead silence goes from texts to audios
as alpha rodeos round our simple flows now so off we go now
Haz is just tryna maintain himself to he can reach his main aim
dead silence i got nothin to say
you and i need to elevate so i wont discriminate
rappers like kurse and rell right now in a state
its just a matter of hate a gate way to escape
are they jelous of each other i dont know i just carry my weight
if i fuck up i rennovate back to my original place
where i may not be a disgrace look in da mirror who do you face
now tell me is there god's gift
no its a fucked up concept thats harmless
nobodies armed with lyrical word for this matter cause its just absurd
spit at this verse give feed and be heard

i wrote this to a beat so i understand if ya dont get the flow
uppin feed

Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 7:41 am
by - Mutual -
Well fuck this shit then

Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 10:12 am
by Omega Bill
[font=Comic Sans MS]You're way past due for some feed from me.

I'll leave feed later on tonight for sure when I have some more time. [/font]

Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 5:52 pm
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
Man ..
This Was Was Lame ..
And U Bit Tha Concept From Bill Who Bit it From HQ ..
Text Wise it Was Trash ..
And a Few Things I Wanna address
First I Don't Wanna Be a Gift to a Nigga I Don't Believe in ..
Second ..i`m Not Jealous Of Kurse ..
Third .. Juss Try audio cus Textin ain't Ya Thang ..
I`m Not Hatin But Quit Tha Simple Shit

Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 7:02 pm
by MesaR
ive said this before it's simple i agree with fiasco just up some creativity man you show alot of potential but it's to simple it's not fun for the reader to read, and that's whats its really about stay up bro, keep dropping

Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 2:09 am
by precise
i didnt like it, n i think i know what beat it was writtin too i just cant remember the name, its an eminem song, shit if i remember the name of it ill be back

anyways it was incredibly basic, no punches, most of it didnt even make a whole lotta sense really, not hatin just tellin it like it is, better luck next time

Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 4:08 am
by - Mutual -
thanks for tha feed
precise it's yellow brick road