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..if it Wasn`t For U

Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 12:24 pm
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
..if it Wasn't For U I Wouldn't Be Where I Stand ..
..If it Wasn't For U I Wouldn't Be Who I Am ..
..if it Wasn't For U I Would Be Livin These Lies ..
..if it Wasn't For U I Would Be a Prisoner inside Mah Own Mind ..

U Helped Mode Tha Creation U See, Even if U Don't Agree U Still Related to Me ..
Pieced Together all These Different Makings Of Me, Stood Down When People Hatin On Me ..
U Would Never Soothe Mah Ego, While Everybody Was On a Stretch to Fill it ..
Rather Battle Text or Writtens, I Would Throw Fits Like i`m Tha K.West Of illest ..
..if it Wasn't For U, Mah Pride Woulda Got Tha Best Of Me ..
Put Me Somewhere Extra Deep ..Instead Of Stressin Me ..
U Simply Juss Let Me Free ..Showed Me How to Become Humble ..
Showed Me There Was More Than One King in Tha Jungle ..
Showed Me To Bow & Weave When I Needed to Rumble ..
..Everythin That Made Me into This Bad Guy That They Say I am ..
..I Took it and Flipped it into Everythin I Am ..
But Sure Enough U Was There, Came Back even after I Set U Free ..
Still Here For Me ..as if U Was Still Mine ..
As if We Had Matchin Names ..& We Still Rhymed ..
..if it Wasn't For U I Think I Woulda Be Slumped Over in Blood ..
..Never Breathin again, Numb and Colder Than Thugs ..
U Was There For Wateva I Need ..
When Reality Sits in, and I No Longer Live Out Tha Dreams ..
When Tha Weigh Of Tha Crushes Mah Mind and Shit ain't All That it Seems ..
I Wanna Thank U ..cus Without You ..
...Where Would I Be? ..

Link: http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/pissy ... t8973.html

Posted: Fri May 23, 2008 8:52 am
by Arvincible
Damn kid, shit was real deep yo, its so creative and the repetition wasn't redundant at all, it was poetic but hardcore flow ya gets?

The ego/k.west line was tight and so was the mode creation line.

I give it an 8.5/10 man

Good stuff bruh keep it comin.

Posted: Fri May 23, 2008 11:04 am
by Haz
Damn..
Dis Shit Wus Deep!!!...
Loved How u Approachd it..
U Sent a Message 2 A Certain Some Good..
Flow Was on Fuckin Point..
Shit Was Creative Son..


U Simply Juss Let Me Free ..Showed Me How to Become Humble ..
Showed Me There Was More Than One King in Tha Jungle .. <-- Deep..


But Sure Enough U Was There, Came Back even after I Set U Free ..
Still Here For Me ..as if U Was Still Mine ..
As if We Had Matchin Names ..& We Still Rhymed ..
..if it Wasn't For U I Think I Woulda Be Slumped Over in Blood ..
..Never Breathin again, Numb and Colder Than Thugs ..

^^^^.. Shit Wus Nice.. "Numb And Colder Than Thugs".. WORD?!.. Dats Deep lol..

I Loved Dis Whooole Piece
Da Flow Wus On Point .. Emotion Wus Dere.. u Got ya Message Out..
u Jus wus On point.. i Like When u Switch Up ya Style but Still come ill ina Different Way

Big Upz ..

Posted: Fri May 23, 2008 11:47 am
by *.HarleQuin.*
lol your welcome haha

Posted: Fri May 23, 2008 12:10 pm
by 16 Micz
yall just needa go back out or sdfu about each other.

Posted: Fri May 23, 2008 12:17 pm
by *.HarleQuin.*
who said that was about me stupid?
maybe i was being facetious,
u stfu you bitter bitch

Posted: Fri May 23, 2008 12:19 pm
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
Micz!!!! ..
Wha`s Good Mah Bro-E!! ..
Lol Thas Mah Nigga yo ..
Still a Fuckin Dick Tho ..

GoodLookin Out Everybody On Tha Fb ..

Ayy Micz Peep Them Kurse Disses Son

Posted: Fri May 23, 2008 2:01 pm
by 16 Micz
*.HarleQuin.* wrote:who said that was about me stupid?
maybe i was being facetious,
u stfu you bitter bitch
im sorry, i know you so well that i should be able to tell when you're being facetious?
kill yourself.




and i already have rell.

Posted: Fri May 23, 2008 9:26 pm
by *.HarleQuin.*
16 Micz wrote:
*.HarleQuin.* wrote:who said that was about me stupid?
maybe i was being facetious,
u stfu you bitter bitch
im sorry, i know you so well that i should be able to tell when you're being facetious?
kill yourself.
no the 'lol' and 'haha' at the end wasnt cue enough

Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 9:44 am
by ..DaGreatest..
sick shit bruh.. yu already know dude..

Posted: Wed May 28, 2008 6:43 am
by - Mutual -
sick shit man deep concept and nice stuff
keep'em comin