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ha ha

verse 1
i'm bustin through a mac strapped my gat pointin at all of you
keep comin til my point come to i'm gangster hunny yeah it's true
comin up inda caddilac my spirit lacks but my lyrics stack
up the money so my hysterics backs it not a generic act
pop that gun wow do one want a merit thats cops equip ya pistol stat
cockin da hammer pointin at scared cops bewared shots
shootin a flair plot to scare'em now gun it so they know that we run it
no fun its life be in a criminal will have to suffice
add a bit herbs n spice a minimal slice
a criminal wife hidin guns scared out of here subliminal mind
cops found'em was it a sinnicle find or were they tipped off
i've been ripped off my guns gettin shipped off they just been slipped off the boat
they've come to arrest me it wasnt me but wot can i say
if i bought the guns i must have more money to get then stolen away
put me in handcuffs my life some where along the line has gone a stray
so i'm locked up my wife rapped and knocked up
by some mafuckas waitin to shoot da block-up
my neighborghood been rocked up i found the mafuckas and socked'em
in they mouth no doubt i be goin back somehow to jail
snitch,bitch,crook,took my life look if i could just find the right hook
lemme tell ya lets go back to the basics
i'm better that way now you gotta face it
say da wrong shit you might just get ya face-split
ya neck slit wrong mafucka to make bets wit
let me test it the rest it will come so invest it
so i was a fucked a child wit a fucked up style
look who's gonna erupt now corrupt foul lookin mafuckas who wanna get beat up now
i maybe fast paced and very racy
just keep up so all of ya can face me

Hook:x2
guns,knives,wives,lives,crooks drugs
alcohol,hoes,baby momas and thugs
ballers,gangsta's,pranksta's,pimps and fuzz
come on live my life with us

uppin feed

tell me wot ya think of this
man

not to bad, multies were pretty decent in some spots but basic in others

a criminal wife hidin guns scared out of her subliminal mind
cops found'em was it a sinnicle find

^^ pretty good

in a nutshell id say it was aright, keep it up

thanks for the feed appreciate it

[font=Comic Sans MS]Not bad, man.

I think you can still up your vocab some, but you're improving in all areas. Especially multis.

Keep it up man, you're getting better.[/font]

aiight thanks preciate it

Nice Bro Multis Were Descent I Was Deffo Feelin It.. Just Try To Contain The Flow Bro.
Overall A Good Drop, Nice Concept. Keep It Coming...

no fun its life be in a criminal will have to suffice
add a bit herbs n spice a minimal slice
a criminal wife hidin guns scared out of here subliminal mind
cops found'em was it a sinnicle find

^^ Also my fav line..

thanks fo da feed preciated