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Real Shit Vol. One Presents "Adopted"

Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 9:46 am
by ..DaGreatest..
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feed link.. if i need one..


Tha mother 'circled' her 'choice' not knowin it would 'score' her doom
Her nigga wanted sex so months later she weeps on the floor for whom?
Had thoughts of perpetual cries but no voice to say "crazy, I'm not ready"
Too late.. cuz now that '16-yr old' a 'woman' with 3 babies in her belly
Mother's in labor as my triplet brothers and I stay rollin in her fetus
Dad was a 'Butt-head' and my mom knowledge 'golden' like she 'Beavis'
Just like a 'television' 'remote'.. mother just 'followed' her 'guides'..
Struggled and all, etc.. so she did what's vital and swallowed her pride
This ain't 'multiple' 'choice' nigga but as I thought a 'option' 'enters'..
Woke up from humble cries and found myself in a adoption center
Was raised in a average predicament with abilites of spontaneous rights
I had tha 'puzzle' but he couldn't 'piece' together tha miscellaneous life
These other youngins got picked but I'm forced stuck in this place
Then a man and woman approached.. then in struck in my face
Now I'm visitin em weekly usin my each and every oppurtunity
Viewin life out tha review now I'm seein tha new community
My new family does tha paperwork as they finally take us in
Now my triplet brothers and I were exposed to the fakes within..
Spoiled wit assessities, smellin fresh as I'm dressed wit charm socks..
BUT, That was my dream of tha past as I pressed my alarm clock

Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 10:33 pm
by ..DaGreatest..
Lyke 22 views.. Uppin fah sum feed

Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 11:48 pm
by Haz
At First i Had a Lil Trouble Readin Dis.
Den i Caught it Quick.. It Was Sick Son..
Shit Was Deep.. I Like How U Went With Da Story Line

Tha mother 'circled' her 'choice' not knowin it would 'score' her doom
Her nigga wanted sex so months later she weeps on the floor for whom?
Had thoughts of perpetual cries but no voice to say "crazy, I'm not ready"
Too late.. cuz now that '16-yr old' a 'woman' with 3 babies in her belly <--- Dis Piece Of it Hit Nice..

Just like a 'television' 'remote'.. mother just 'followed' her 'guides'..
Struggled and all, etc.. so she did what's vital and swallowed her pride
This ain't 'multiple' 'choice' nigga but as I thought a 'option' 'enters'..
Woke up from humble cries and found myself in a adoption center

^^^ Dat Piece Of it Wus Sick 2...




BUT, That was my dream of tha past as I pressed my alarm clock

^^^ ill Ass Way To End it In My Opinion

i'd Give Dis a 8/10.. Just Cus It Culda Bin Longer

Keep Droppin Different Concepts..

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 11:23 pm
by daTruth
i aint have any problems at all readin dis, it was sick fam, loved it all i agree wit it shoulda been longer doe

Posted: Fri May 30, 2008 6:47 pm
by - Mutual -
woah nice concept
it was on point nice ending
i liked it got da vocab and nice flow
man keep'em flowin