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Posted: **Mon Jun 02, 2008 6:35 pm**

Its Coming From the HEART.. the Respect I Got for the Man TUPAC.. His Music Guided me Through HARD-TIMES Came out With RAW-LINES and compliCATED-RHYMES.. But We UNDERSTOOD Where You Coming From the HOOD.. So many People Felt the CONNECTION Still To This Day Show You AFFECTION Its All GOOD.. I Never Knew Your Words Could Bring People To TEARZ.. You Conquered All Your FEARZ.. And Still Had Some Good YEARZ!.. You Made It.. Your Music Is Heard All ACROSS-THE-WORLD.. You Managed To Spark The Brain To Bring CHANGE-ON-THIS-EARTH.. I Just Hope We have The TIME To REWIND.. Make Peace With ONE-ANOTHER.. Hopin One Day We Can Learn To APPRECIATE-EACH-OTHER.. You Know Were All In THIS-TOGETHER.. World Falls Apart WE-FALL-TOGETHER.. He Wanted Peace With Himself IT-WAS-A-MUST.. Its Just Amazing Thinking Back That One Day OUR-SAVIOR-WAS-ON-EARTH-WITH-US.. He Shared His Feelings HAPPY-AND-SAD.. Went Through the GOOD-AND-BAD.. But We All HAD-HIS-BACK Like He Was Family A YOUNGER-BROTHER He Could Describe His Feelings In Songs LIKE-NO-OTHER.. But Out There Was Where He SEEMED-TO-BE-EMPTY.. Had Money But His ENEMIES-SEEMED-TO-BE-PLENTY.. Still Cant BELIEVE Why He Could Have Been Hated ??? His PROPHECY.. He Saw Himself LEAVE But Wasnt Bothered By GREED.. He Knew One Way Or Another He Was MEANT-TO-LEAVE-UNWILLINGLY.. He Left With Shots To THE-CHEST But Still His Spirit Lives On And We Know He Was THE-BEST! He came down with OPEN ARMS.. wanted NO HARM.. but was ALARMED.. at this place we CALL HOME? No FATHER ALL ALONE.. left the world but look at what HE-HAS-DONE? tryed TO to bring PEACE but people looked at HIM-AS-A-STRANGER.. but i know it was THE-OPEN-ARMS-OF-AN-ANGEL!!

.... RIP LESANE PARISH CROOKS

Posted: **Mon Jun 02, 2008 10:11 pm**

i like the idea and concept basically what you said was true, but what the hell was with the flow and structure and some of those multis you spat didnt connect/match up keep working on em, the realness was on point, could of been done alot better though, good decent drop for your first on here, stay active, keep dropping!,

Posted: **Tue Jun 03, 2008 12:13 am**

I did this ages ago ! like 3-4 months ! but i just wanted to get His Realness across !!

Posted: **Tue Jun 03, 2008 12:39 am**

aiight it was good but you need a better structure so it's easier fo people to read nice script fo ya first one
keep'em comin ya

Posted: **Tue Jun 03, 2008 8:19 am**

Tribute to the one and only....PAC...best to ever do it, will neva be replace...he like mah second father i lyked dis piece cuz i could easily relate to it

Posted: **Thu Jun 05, 2008 7:28 am**

decent story, simple rhymes, i noticed alot of sets of hyphenated words, was that to show multies or to emphasize parts? i dunno, overall id say uve got some potential,keep writin

Posted: **Fri Jun 06, 2008 4:49 am**

lol at Gutta sayin Pac`s his second father.

anyway this was OK. nice concept but i hate the structure but i know thats the normal way of structuring verses on some sites

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A TRIBUTE CYPHER !!

A TRIBUTE CYPHER !!