BLOOD, SWEAT, NO TEARS

[Cee4]

Life's a bitch but I embrace it, its luck, n pops got it shady man
His life was in the balance, but I still dropped against Ladysam
Been over that before, im saying my dedications worth mentioning
I dropped against Hazard, the next day in court facing ma sentencing
Probation, lucky but the conviction got me dispatched from college
As much as I`ve tried, my self control never did match my knowledge
Dumb! i thought stealing car radios was my ticket out of poverty
Numb! I thought to take a knife in the stomach n pick it out is loyalty
Stab him back, startin to realise that the picture painted`s nonsense
Its no big deal, im non religious so I can live with a tainted conscience
But I aint crying, no tears, im not the man if u want some emotion
Its nothin, the blood on my hands is just another drop in the ocean
Commotion, back in the day I was a meathead I was raised a scrapper
Now smarter, but I've still got more street cred than ya favourite rapper
Perversely proud of that, blazed in the crib is now where u find me
Puttin the bullshit behind me, but these wounds serve to remind me
That I took it and dished it out, in the street armed with a hammer
When i had no computer, now rather I'd coz harm with ma grammar
First drop in the Concepts, switched it up, headin for a better me?
Nah, no love raps, Me & My Girlfirend was a metaphor for ecstasy
Fuck audio, text battler, if its dumb why speak what can-be-wrote
Its time to slow down, livin life too fast, I guess weed is the antidote
So i get Blazed
These blood shot eyes mask the clear thoughts thats behind them
Untapped rhyme gems, but I gotta smoke a quarter ounze to find them

[- Mutual -]

First drop in the Concepts, switched it up, headin for a better me?
Nah, no love raps, Me & My Girlfirend was a metaphor for ecstasy
Fuck audio, text battler, if its dumb why speak what can-be-wrote
Its time to slow down, livin life too fast, I guess weed is the antidote

My Fave Bit^
aiight i liked this overall 8.5/10
nice flow
i liked the concept
nice multies
Keep'em Comin

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I'd Have To Agree.... You Did Nice Bro... 7.5/10...Multis' Was Descent ..Coulda Been Better...And Topic Was Str8 And Concept Was Good...Thorough Drop...Propz...

[Subsist]

This is a very good piece. It shows great emotion and tells a nice story.
Good job. You should always rap about stuff that is emotionally affecting you in life.

Me & My Girlfriend was a metaphor for a pistol not extacy.

[Cee4]

thanks for the feed people

and subsist i wasnt talking about the 2pac version lol
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/me-an ... 8b33d5cf65

[Subsist]

Oh okay. That was good. The ones that gave feedback never noticed.

[|.R.SON.aLL.|]

..This Piece Was Good Fam ..
I Liked Tha Ones That Were Quoted ..
..You Make Me Wanna Throw Some Personal Shit Up in Some Lyrical Shit ..Lol