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Cats:
Flow
Metas
Multies
Personels
Creativity
and any you wanna add yeah
this is my check

4 bars due 18 hours after each check

Check.

duc3 i'm comin atcha

call me out i'm scared but i'll kill ya maybe later
last time ya words had heat ya left ya pen-n-paper on a radiator

i'll get ya bowin down to me like a delight-king
ya used to spendin time on ya kness this might be a-right-win

my lyrical punches hit ya like ali or tyson
ya lines played we see'em comin every day like da horizon

i'm gone get a cross and fuckin christen you
you attackin back is like Soulja Boy makin a song sum one listen's too


that never gone happen ye
sorry about editing but i thought of sumin to change and make it slightly better
uppin duc3 verse

LOL @ Tha First Line.. "Call Me Out I'm Scared"..Nice Try|




[align=center]My Verbal Flow Sick I'll Murk This Hoe Quick An Explode With Doses Of Tuberculoses
Oh SHIT!...Gun's Loaded...Dis Fag's Fake...After Dis...Yall Will See Host Is(Hostes) In Plastic Like SNACK CAKES..
You Comin In Last Place...In Beefin.. Because Its Apparent They See Me Defeatin...
U Betta Declarin Ya Retreatin...Or I'll Leave This Host With An Open House...Like Parent Teacher Meetings!
Im Scarin Til Ya Cease Ta Breathin...Stupid To Even Proceeding To Battle Me
I'll Make You Bleed With Ease An Then Succeed With Calvary Then Take Ya Salary
You Suck..is It Ya Rap Allergies.... But Dawg..You'll Never Ravage N Murder Shit
If He Dares Ta Try... I'll Leave This Clown On The Road Like Travelin Circuses![/align]


1.) hostess are like debbie cakes in plastic etc.. and body bag

okay votes

vote duc3.

favorite line by mutual

call me out i'm scared but i'll kill ya maybe later
last time ya words had heat ya left ya pen-n-paper on a radiator

i thought that was your best one that fit the cats.

for duc3. my favorite line was his opening line as well


My Verbal Flow Sick I'll Murk This Hoe Quick An Explode With Doses Of Tuberculoses
Oh SHIT!...Gun's Loaded...Dis Fag's Fake...After Dis...Yall Will See Host Is(Hostes) In Plastic Like SNACK CAKES..

but it seemed later in the flow you didnt keep it as strong but thats how i feel but to me you were on the cats more, either way it was a good battle good job to the both of you, if you need anymore explained please say so and ill gladly tell you.

Flow: Duc3
Metas: Duc3
Multies: Duc3
Personals: None
Creativity: Duc3

Vote: Duc3

i'm okay
0-2

call me out i'm scared but i'll kill ya maybe later
last time ya words had heat ya left ya pen-n-paper on a radiator

ok...concept is kinda simple. It's alright

i'll get ya bowin down to me like a delight-king
ya used to spendin time on ya kness this might be a-right-win

this couldve been better

my lyrical punches hit ya like ali or tyson
ya lines played we see'em comin every day like da horizon

I actually really liked this concept a lot. It was creative. I think you could've worded it better thouh

i'm gone get a cross and fuckin christen you
you attackin back is like Soulja Boy makin a song sum one listen's too

i dont know why but i thought this was funny. It was really really simple but you get creativity points

My Verbal Flow Sick I'll Murk This Hoe Quick An Explode With Doses Of Tuberculoses
Oh SHIT!...Gun's Loaded...Dis Fag's Fake...After Dis...Yall Will See Host Is(Hostes) In Plastic Like SNACK CAKES..

this was pretty good actually.

You Comin In Last Place...In Beefin.. Because Its Apparent They See Me Defeatin...
U Betta Declarin Ya Retreatin...Or I'll Leave This Host With An Open House...Like Parent Teacher Meetings!

this was ok

Im Scarin Til Ya Cease Ta Breathin...Stupid To Even Proceeding To Battle Me
I'll Make You Bleed With Ease An Then Succeed With Calvary Then Take Ya Salary

Didn't like it...seemed like filler

You Suck..is It Ya Rap Allergies.... But Dawg..You'll Never Ravage N Murder Shit
If He Dares Ta Try... I'll Leave This Clown On The Road Like Travelin Circuses!

This was decent.


breakdown:

Flow: Eh...it was close but Duc3 had his setups packed with multis, mostly filler but it stilled made the flow easy to follow. So duc3
Metas: Tie.
Multies: This was the only onesided category. Duc3
Personals: Don't think either side had any, i dont count nameflips as personals

Wordplay: Duc3
Creativity: Mutual
Concepts: Mutual
Punches: Duc3


Overall, I'm gonna vote for Duc3. The hostess line and the circus line just won it for em. Some of the wordplay was slightly forced including the hostess line which I liked but it was still decent.

Nice battle. Return the favor and vote on mine if you don't mind

0-3 KO
mafucka shit
well sum one update this