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orange= me
blue= dead

[align=center]Yeah Mother FUCKA!!!!!!!!!



I'll Fuck Up Ya Section, In Another Direction An Rupture Injection That Start Crushin Ya Chest In,
I Decapitate An Ravage Gays Magic Mark Strays In Dark Way I Shoot With Sharp Kays They'll Say He Caught Rays,
From The Infre Red Dot, Glock Will Bend Ya Head Watch...Thats Tha End Of That Scared Flop... Droppin Options
With One Opticals A Ton Topple Through Causin Chronilogical Problems Involvin Me Droppin You!
Rip Ya Leg Off Fuck Hip Hop I Lick Shot Yo Chick Jocked, Boxed In Different Spectrum My Dogs Rippin Flesh In
Leave Sequence To Believe E-Friends, I'll Off Dis Nigga Durin Tha Work Days An Then Torture Him Durin Tha weekend,
Slurrin Each An... Every Nigga Who Decides To Ride Is Commitin An Self Homocide, I Dealt Drama Wide...
To Be Honest When It Comes To Tha Intelligence Sequence One Of Tha Dumbest!,
Duce Bruisin Ya Quick I'll Be Usin My Fist Ya Confused Cuz Ya Cant Comprehend PUNCHES!..
My Dungeon Is Somethin, It'll Be Horrifyin For Ya While Im Glorifyin Torture, You'll Die Of Extortion
And Lie Out Of Exisistence Like Abortion, Ya Shoulda Listen Like That Orphan...
Cuz Ya Can't Deal This Man Harm...I'll Mutate You Fruit Cake An Give Ya Four Fins...
Let This Whore-Spin....Ya Ride Heads So Much They Should Call You Saddle Top..
But Fuck That I Enforce What I Mean Like A Judge When The Gaddle Drops,I Rattle Blocks And Battle Cops
It's Sad Ya Not... Up To Par Fuck Ya Bars ...Scar Ya With My Claws Kid....
Like Foriegn Eskimo's You Ain Ready For All This Rawness...My Lyrics Equal The Lawless Aushwitchz....[/align]


[align=center]Now Go Murk Ya Self Prick...FINISH'EM OFF DEAD



man. how the fuck u gonna diss me where ever i go?maaaan u gone done fucked up now.

listen here youngin

this faggot here will try to drop the heat,u got hemoglobin like mark aka the weak //
my punches jump out and punch u in ur cheek,ur last win is when u fell off ur peak//

leave you face down in pool of red blood cells,i got the blue that'll expel..//
ya shit when u try to excel,beyond your level,leave ya sticky like gel//

ill spit what ever oozes out my mouth,and melt ya without doubt//
and end your drought,im pavin ova ur road so choose a different route//

your going down the wrong trail,when it comes to life ur kind fails//
when u drop its just a tall tail,i can read u like the blind and brailles//

i could give u all the answers, and u still couldnt pass in this rap shit//
ur lines are like a dancer with cancer,dance all over you till ur back is split//[/align]

Much better kids, a lot better than the last one

Duc3 went crazy on this real shit man I liked it.
I caught the flow most the time so im feelin ya. I like the second bar the most.

I can't quote on this phone!!

And dead silence, ur punches still don't hit as hard as we all wud want but ur actually getting there man good job , to be honest I left feed on the other piece but u guys deleted it but I wanna tell u that the other one was crappy lol . This one is better. This one hurt mark a little man.


Peeace

thats the plan but thanks man

man nice stuff i'll be back to give proper feed later

right nice flow's wot a diss
nice mutlies stayed on point and i liked it
i'd give it a 8/10
Dead keep writtin ya gettin better and better

your going down the wrong trail,when it comes to life ur kind fails//
when u drop its just a tall tail,i can read u like the blind and brailles//

Dead Fave Bit ^
man nice shit

I'll Fuck Up Ya Section, In Another Direction An Rupture Injection That Start Crushin Ya Chest In,
I Decapitate An Ravage Gays Magic Mark Strays In Dark Way I Shoot With Sharp Kays They'll Say He Caught Rays,

Duc3 Fave Bit^
man you write good shit anyways
keep'em comin

thanks

UPPIN

not bad not bad