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Alright..
4 Bars
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Punch Lines -
Multis -
Name Play -
Personals -
Flow -

Bars due... a.s.a.p?

Yeah that's fine by me

LoL Alright im writing up my verse now....

just waiting on you

[align=center]My Vocal Scorning Will Have The Locals Mourning... This Is Just Anotha Hopeless Haunting!
...Im Shootin Tha Chamber..Wen Dey Say Future Is In Danger...They Don't Mean Global WARNING!
Ya Flowin Is Borin....Ya Growin Annoyin... Nigga I'll Boot Ya Scheme...An Shoot Ya Team...
Polute Tha Scene... An Then Bruise Ya Fiends...Similar To Child Celebrity Deaths...I KILL Future DREAMS!!
Im Sick Of Ya Feeble Sentences...I'll Decieve The Innocent... An Then Leave Ya Finished Quick...
An This Unfamiliar Nigga Will Get Sick Of Fences (Offenses).......LIKE ILLEGAL IMMIGRANTS....
This Guy's Disgrace I'll Spit At Sick Pace And Have His Life Erased....Dawg Why You Gay!?!?!
Don't Matter Cuz After This Battle They'll Be No Future... LIKE Y2K!!!!
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Edit: Had To Fix Some Bold Mistakes An A Misplaced Word

This dude is a PUSSY...and I don't need glasses to tell ya....
There's a HOLE under ya BUSH like a SECRET PASSAGE IN ZELDA...!!!

I'll send clips flyin that'll make duc, duck...whatchu waiting for...a goose?! You geek...
One battle and I could "SIGN...OFF YA LIFE" quicker than "DEAF TRANSLATIONS" given at "EULOGIES"...!!!

I'll stab into ya chest...This kid is next to get stepped by the feet of this rap pest
Go Ask em "Who's The Best?"..."THE INTERNET WILL DIRECT YOU TO ME" like MAPQUEST...!!!

Get popped like champaigne - What happened when I Dropped my verse and murdered this damn lame????
"THIS BITCH RAN...AND WENT RIGHT OUT THE WINDOW" like explaining "HILLARY CLINTON'S CAMPAIGN...!!!


*edited for typo*

good battle, vote em up

Pretty Descent Verse....Upping For Votes.

Punch Lines - Future
Multis - Duc3
Name Play - Duc3
Personals - Future(just it was close)
Flow - future

Get popped like champaigne - What happened when I Dropped my verse and murdered this damn lame????
"THIS BITCH RAN...AND WENT RIGHT OUT THE WINDOW" like explaining "HILLARY CLINTON'S CAMPAIGN...!!!

my fave bar from Future was ^

Im Sick Of Ya Feeble Sentences...I'll Decieve The Innocent... An Then Leave Ya Finished Quick...
An This Unfamiliar Nigga Will Get Sick Of Fences (Offenses).......LIKE ILLEGAL IMMIGRANTS....

My fave From Duc3 Was^

wow this was a good battle but future had that better verse to jus about take it

..Koo Little Battle ..

Punches - Duc3 ..His Hit Harder and More Directed On Future, Where Future Had Some Decent Punches That Coulda Easily Been Used On Any Rapper On This Site ..

Wordplay - Duc3 Took This Cat Wit Ease ..

Nameplay/Personals - Duc3 ..He Had Nice Personals and Nameplay ..Future Had That Lame Line Bout Duc Duck Goose ..Nice Attempt But Nah Wha`s Cuttin it Fam ..That Was Only Time Future Even Said Duc3`s Name ..Lol So I Don't See How Mutual Gave Future Personals ..

Flow - Future`s Was a Little Easier to Read Than Duc3 ..

Multies - Duc3 Tied His Words Together Better Than Future and Actually Made Sense ..

I Don't Think This Battle Was Close at all ..Duc3 Smashed Had ..and Had Better Punches and Nameplay Which Gave Him Tha Win Easy ..

evryones got there opinion

Punch Lines - 6/10
Multis - 8/10
Name Play - 7/10
Personals - 6/10
Flow - 6/10
Wordplay - 6/10
Complexity - 5/10
Setups - 6/10
Creativity - 4/10
Metaphors - 6/10

60/100

Duc3, you had a few obvious nameplays. Your best line was prolly the immigrant line. Lots of filler or for setups which is expected for the most part. Overall, wasnt bad wasn't great

Future
Punch Lines - 8/10
Multis - 7/10
Name Play - 2/10
Personals - 2/10
Flow - 6/10
Wordplay - 7/10
Complexity - 7/10
Setups - 6/10
Creativity - 8/10
Metaphors - 9/10

62/100


Future you had some good lines but you should be more direct.

This match was really close, you see the numbers. Vote - Future

Punch Lines - Duce
Multis - Duce
Name Play - Duce
Personals - Duce..
Flow - Future


To Be Honest.. i Didnt Like Some Of Futures Line..
Duce In Some Sections Aint Like Ur Flow..
But Da "a Fence" Line wus Mean.. & Da Global Warnin Line Wus Tough..
Good Battle Yall..

Vote - Duce

Punch Lines -Duc3 (they hit a little bit harder than Futures although he did have good ones it was close but Duc3 had em)
Multis -Duc3 (same as above)
Name Play -duc3 (i only saw one from each of u and duce's was creative and futures was kinda a lame attempt no hate)
Personals -tied
Flow -Duc3 (read better)

Duc3 kinda shit on u man. work on ya shit a little bit more. u have a lot of potential u just gotta unlock it.

VOTE-DUC3

3-2

Fraud wrote:Punch Lines - 6/10
Multis - 8/10
Name Play - 7/10
Personals - 6/10
Flow - 6/10
Wordplay - 6/10
Complexity - 5/10
Setups - 6/10
Creativity - 4/10
Metaphors - 6/10

60/100

Duc3, you had a few obvious nameplays. Your best line was prolly the immigrant line. Lots of filler or for setups which is expected for the most part. Overall, wasnt bad wasn't great

Future
Punch Lines - 8/10
Multis - 7/10
Name Play - 2/10
Personals - 2/10
Flow - 6/10
Wordplay - 7/10
Complexity - 7/10
Setups - 6/10
Creativity - 8/10
Metaphors - 9/10

62/100


Future you had some good lines but you should be more direct.

This match was really close, you see the numbers. Vote - Future

LoL It's Obvious Ya His Homie Which Is Koo...But Dood...Vote Along The Cats I Set Up...Ya Lucky I'm Letting Ya Vote...Ya Atleast Have To Drop A Script Or Battle Fam...Now Re Vote And Go Decide With Tha Cats Below....

Punch Lines -
Multis -
Name Play -
Personals -
(Look in fraud's post and you'll see i got more numbers in those cats)

LoL But Idc.....Upping 3-2.
Blah...Let'Em Have Tha Vote LoL...