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Complex:Hi Micz
Micz:wad dup queer
Complex:nothing chillin
Micz:right
Complex:wanna cypher
Micz:Naw im straight kinda busy
Complex:oh well your cyphers arent off the top anyway
Micz:right
Micz:ok queer
Micz:my shit isnt off the top....?
Micz:hows this...

definitely a mistake writing the first word/
no complications dissin this nerd,who was hurt, when i called his rhymes absurd/
i preferred to use wack, but ill skip that attack/
if he thinks that he brings, any type of recognition to himself then knowledge is what he lacks/
what this implies, is that this bitch, is mine/
dont be surprised, when i say hes a chick disguised/
maybe if he gets advised, that this costs his life/
maybe he'll quit rappin n say his goodbyes/
similiarity, is a factor,leave your brains in a wrapper/
basically your an actor, cause your damn as hell not a rapper/
n after, i master, the style of an actor,
ill part chu like the red sea n name u natural disaster/
in the 10 line he beat me, the rap scene i ripped-his-ass/
sad, i guess this is what u get when u mix a lil bit of dick w/ ass/
you called that a diss but i beg to differ/
you begged for an ass whoopin more then u begged your sister/(not that hard to understand)
im not overated im just rated over you/
your death was overdue,a dead man ull turn into,
when the bullets go threw you,ill laugh n watch chu scream to show u what a real ho cud do/
regardless, lets be honest,ive thought of more disses than you can practically come wit/
ill laugh at the murder i com-mit,if that was a sick diss how come u only got 2 comments/
you saying your 40 bars are-sick you must be blun-ted,
its funny cause those same 2 comments...had nothing detailed they were full of nonsense/
you must be crazy, commin to me all shady, w/ bravery like u wanna ride/
funny, when the argument started he tried to get hazy on his side/
lately im on a rise, feelin the urge to fall into this publicity/
wit so much energy,i can guarantee,
plex'll feel the wrath of the elder n move to tennessee/
fuck dissin u,im rippin u, waitin for the lyrics to get into you/
your complexity is not ly-ric-cal,fk plex im dismissing you..one shot..nobodies missin you/
this dude rhymed costume w/ perfume does anyone see the problem/
maybe ill teach plex a thing or two after i dislodge em/
ive ripped much contenders i guess your next/
im might not threat chu, but thats because i only threat the best/
so when hes not breathin,n when he stops bleeding
i garuntee a life, cuz his bitch'll see my semen, n then we start breeding
lets keep proceeding, n recognize how pussy this weak hos being/
so when he starts reading, n notices the shit im sending
is the beginning of his ending,n it gets offending
he'll kno that im defending the right to his permanent suspending/
of his wack unending, raps thats crap,thats depending
on his lifes ending,take my advice plex n just stop protending/
your disgust the nation,n bring much frustration, to the forum so thats why ur spot..im replacing/
just as 50 needed publicity,n paris wanted dick/
u begged me to make a few post n daily come on this shit/
i stayed,i gave,your right i betrayed,
but fuck all that truthfully FB is the forum i made/
i gave aid,i helped out, this faggit talked shit before so i left out/
hes gay, hes wack, he sucks, truthfully he needs practice/
but lets bring up something..tom tell the people why FB got inactive/
you know what fuck it, ive heard all the shit someone can talk about me/
but i left to prove FB would be nothin w/out me/
credit is credit but its said cause no one is givin credit to you/
but all im sayin is faggit,admit, that chu should have gave credit where credit was due/
the lies true, your a dyke dude, sorry to tell the world but um yea -i- knew/
and im who, likes to, tear the contenders that i see in my view/
but hows this for a traitor..fuck you and your forum faggit i never liked you!

Complex:that wasnt off the top
Micz:your right your right it wasnt
Micz:but it killed your wack shit
Complex:my 40 bars was sick man,dude there was no other diss like it
Complex:ive never saw a goood diss from you
Micz:ok
Complex:micz, can i tell you something
Micz:what?
Complex:promise not to tell anyone!??!!?!??!?
Micz:yea ok..
Complex:i have a crush on jesta..
Complex:pretty much why im constantly on his dick
Complex:aallllll the time
Complex:and umm well, i think i wanna join E.V.I.L
Complex:maybe take your spot
Micz:alright
Complex:well im out my show is on..
Complex:queer eye<3

....probibly one of the weakest peices of wannabe diss writing I've ever read. You diss him about rhyming perfume and costume....and you have publicity, garuntee, and tennesee?.....now who has a bad rhyming scheme here in comparison...SHHHHH BOY.

you're the one who is in need of practice.

k 1st of all you spelt probally wrong...

n be serious you only said it was wack because its dissin tom c'mon now.....

oh n if you actually say publicity,tennessee n guarantee out loud it rhymes idk whats going threw your head though but ok..

probably: actually you both spelled it wrong

As for that rhyme yah the very last syllable

Overall this diss had its high and low points, thats all i got to say about that.

~!~

Lol, Tom
Micz, really would FB be nothing without you?
Your like a Johnny-Come lately nigga

i read about 1/3 of it... it was ehh.. aight i guess.. i'm not a big fan of basic rhyme schemes so i couldn't muster the attention span to peep the rest of it

word of advice homie unless you got 50+ bars of pure heat that you're completely sure everyone will absolutely love, don't make your diss 50+ bars... shorten it to 10-20 of the best bars.. more people will be inclined to peep it and will most likely give you a better response

overall this was alright, i've seen better from you

well.. hahah.. tom ripped that way earlier in the game.. giving u the advantage to flip that.. funny how u even got low enough to make it seme like he really said that.. even if tom was drunk he wouldn't say something like that.. but it was a nice try i guess.. as far as the verse.. could've been better for a comeback.. more like an attempt that failed but maybe next time u'll get em..or not, who knows