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For a collab with a friend, doing a spin off of that immortal tech song dance with the devil, is you aint heard it look it up... (hopefuly some of ya'll catch the subtle nuiances in the piece lol)

the idea was we'd do it explaining more of the guys life, i was taking the "what if he went the good route".. not searching after gangsters... he was taking the "bad route" again..

heres my piece...

Soul been opened in two, but im hoping that new
chances arise cause the dance I despise has left me broken and blue
A gun life, with fun fights had been callin me' its frighten'n
But one night, some guy should have seen that all I need's enlightn'n
A teacher to preach of the ways to do the right thing
but I had already seen the world of evil that only the devil's side brings
Seen the hustlers at work, sling'in, the murder n' the violence
'Momma tried to stop me ridin', she knew the hurt that pain n' lies did
Sat me down, jus' us around, n' said, “first id learn what pride isâ€

nice flow
i aint heard the song but this is good stuff
nice multies stayed on point nicely and keep'em comin

But one night, some guy should have seen that all I need's enlightn'n
A teacher to preach of the ways to do the right thing
but I had already seen the world of evil that only the devil's side brings
Seen the hustlers at work, sling'in, the murder n' the violence
'Momma tried to stop me ridin', she knew the hurt that pain n' lies did
Sat me down, jus' us around, n' said, “first id learn what pride isâ€

if you havent heard the song you need to. My favorite of all time.