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Alpha Bill Slaughter..
Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 8:58 am
by DressToKill
You Asked For It..
You Want Me To Spare Ya Rap?Coming At Me?Its Not Fair Infact..
Cuz The Only Straight Bill I Ever Seen Was On My New Era Hat!
This Kid Sucks But He Writes Still?My Punches Put You On Ice...Killed
You're Writtens Are Like Payments Man!..Nobody's Like's Bills! (Punked)
My Verse Straight Slayed Him,This Kids Wack..Someone Save Em
Cuz This Bill Couldnt Pass Even Standing Infront Of The Legislative!
Dude I Got This Rook Smoked,Kid Your Looking Sketchy With Every Shook Post!
Your Fuck Buddy,Is Out Of Lucky Dummy And With Ya Weak Writtens Even HE LOOKS DOPE!
Yea, You Cant Play Me G,To Be Honest Your Spitting Strangely B..
Its Like Im Murdering The Alphabet How Im Killing A-B..See?(C)
Finished..Come Harder Next Time Rook
Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 9:02 am
by JayGunna
Damn Step Up Alpha Bill..
Nice Shit D2K...
My Verse Straight Slayed Him,This Kids Wack..Someone Save Em
Cuz This Bill Couldnt Pass Even Standing Infront Of The Legislative!
Yea, You Cant Play Me G,To Be Honest Your Spitting Strangely B..
Its Like Im Murdering The Alphabet How Im Killing A-B..See?(C)
OH SHIT!!!
Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 9:05 am
by DressToKill
Thanks Jay Appreciated
Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 9:06 am
by ÐÛÇ£»
Lmaooo...I Know You Was Going To Respond Soon
pretty nice piece...Definitely better then what Bill wrote about you...Multi's Was On Point...Punches Were Hitting Smoothly...Flow Was Stretched In One Part But Thatz Prolly Tha Only Screw-Up In The Post.....Overall Rating 8/10..I Liked Tha Flow..I'm Sure Bill Will Respond...
My Fav Line...
My Verse Straight Slayed Him,This Kids Wack..Someone Save Em
Cuz This Bill Couldnt Pass Even Standing Infront Of The Legislative
Ya Bodied Alpha...
LoL Keep It Up Fam...You Have Potential..No Doubt..
Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 9:07 am
by DressToKill
Props Duce..
Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 9:53 am
by DressToKill
Would appreciate more feed on this if possible
Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 10:14 am
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
Lmfao Wow ..
That Last Bar
Was Killa ..
I Didn't Like Tha Openin Bar ..
But Everythin Else After Was Pretty Nice ..
Came Out Swingin Hard ..
Stay Up Fam
Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 10:15 am
by DressToKill
Damn lol I that my opening bar was nice..thanks though props on the feed
Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 10:32 am
by ..DaGreatest..
props to u, u came hard at em..
Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 10:35 am
by Omega Bill
Overall it was nice.
Dude I Got This Rook Smoked,Kid Your Looking Sketchy With Every Shook Post!
Your Fuck Buddy,Is Out Of Lucky Dummy And With Ya Weak Writtens Even HE LOOKS DOPE!
Yea, You Cant Play Me G,To Be Honest Your Spitting Strangely B..
Its Like Im Murdering The Alphabet How Im Killing A-B..See?(C)
Finished..Come Harder Next Time Rook
1. Weak writtens? Kid, get serious.
2. "Come harder next time rook" shouldnt be used when you got fucking jacked by Arvincible and he's been battling for only 6 months.
Overall, it was nice though. Last line had good wordplay and was creative.
Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 10:36 am
by DressToKill
I like how you get your little shot in at the end..also with 1557 posts..you should be a little more elevated than you are..
Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 12:58 pm
by Omega Bill
Right, and you'd think with all that shit you talk you'd of called more people out by now.
To each his own. I'm not gonna fill your scrip with bullshit because I don't agree with free-posting.
Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 1:10 pm
by Haz
Bananaz..
Its Like Im Murdering The Alphabet How Im Killing A-B..See?(C)
Cuz This Bill Couldnt Pass Even Standing Infront Of The Legislative!
You're Writtens Are Like Payments Man!..Nobody's Like's Bills!
I Felt Them Shits Da Most..
Good Shit.. i Wanna See a Rematch With U N Arv... lol ...