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A lil verse I put together the other day... hope y'all like it!


I told ya, the streets need some noise
so I put the beast back in the Beastie Boyz
whatever i do i don't give emcees a choice
that's a sign of weakness, feed em my voice
the beats rejoice when i enter the booth
let me assemble the youth and show u the truth
raise up to the critics, show em that hip hop
aint dead - i'd rather have my shit drop instead
prove em wrong, cause legends are laughin
echo in the night, the dead are graspin - at us
tryin to reach us and teach us the basics of a classic
grab the mic or pass it like a cypher
a hot verse or a hot ass, it's hard tellin what's nicer
I know i can cause nasir told me so
and like his better half i can't control my flow
it's so spectacular, u should call me dracula
by the way I plaster ya like a massacre
it's the passion of the christ, we die like martyrs
but we don't serve a god, we only artists

It Was Pretty nice son..
Aint Like da Cypher punch
Da Multies Wus On Point pretty much..
The Flow Was on Lock..
Message Got Across..
Leave my Script Feed U bastard

hmm nice enough, flow and rhyming were cool, punches could have been better, more creative, get what im saying

this piece was no where near "fire" imo, nice key like.. but not my type of piece..

man well sum nice stuff all round
nice multies
nice flow
but i couldnt really say it was ya best drops
but it was nice 7/10
jus me

it's so spectacular, u should call me dracula
by the way I plaster ya like a massacre
it's the passion of the christ, we die like martyrs
but we don't serve a god, we only artists

my fave bit^
keep'em comin

this was more or less a keystyle that i posted.. the title was just to draw your attention.. guess it worked.. lol.. thanks for feed guys.. it's appreciated