Hip Hop Forum

It seems that i can only flow good when i use the same rhyme like over and over again...

example: ayo, what the odds be, flow godly make tracks drop bombs, kamakaze.
Fuck where the cops be, flying at moc speed, try to stop me, genocide like da nazis.
Do this shit properly, getting my monopoly, cocky, cant knock me, yous are not me..etc.

I cant make a transistion to another rhyme without disecting the whole bar...
i dont know what to do...

Firstly, Can someone tell me what flow is just to make sure im not wrong, and Secondly can someone tell me how to make a transistion between lines...

How I make a transition is the first half of the next bar will have the end rhyme..like this:

ayo, what the odds be, flow godly make tracks drop bombs, kamakaze.
Fuck where the cops be, flying at moc speed, try to stop me, genocide like da nazis.
Do this shit properly - (insert new rhyme scheme here)

I say work on it like this....well this is what I do

I envision a system where the keep guiding missions
the split em by the seconds, hell beckons within em
they might be wreckless, their senses is senseless
their defenses will get them rip'd into oblivion
check this.......then on n on

sometimes these just come to mind....this was off the top
I could continue on, buuuuut either way it's based on how you work with your rhymes
if you choose to go all out with multi's then with your inners, just toy with them
like I just did, like....

Simplicity is hittin' me vividly I hate it
I'm degraded to basics thats been mixed with green
I'm up in smoke face it, I made it n waste it
givin' dreams a new....n so on....

either way you'll figure it out!

honestly its just about practice... disecting a verse to make it fit with the beat is a bit hard but all u gotta do is work on it n u'll get it...

Lawgix hit it right, once you do that, you will be able to flow multis together using words that normally when you rap them or use them wouldnt rhyme or go together then you just go off that words rhymes and keep flowing, its alot easier to do this with 2 syllables words or bigger, Also words that end with "ing", "tion/sion" "ly" ect, can easily be rhymed with littler words.. Example: "Baking" into "Take In".. All about practicing and just doing it everywhere you go, Time and practice makes a good artist