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Just a keystyle, plz feed

Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 12:37 am
by MadKNiFe
[align=center]The guy's life is like a desert, there's not a soul to be found
Nothing's grown in there for a while, there's an echo but no sound
On the outside, ma lil' guy is broken like old plastics
The mind is working on the next tactic, planning to get his heart back from the attic
And while he's at it, flashbacks hit the times he tot were fantastic
But now his life is static, a pain in the flesh like government taxes
Put the memories behind him cuz he says he's way past it
Life ain't bout the dough you make, but the number of practice
That keeps you way above the waters like Jesus walked
The effort you put to something can't leave, a good name cannot be socks(spoilt)
So this guy woke up from the trance that he was in
Gotta get the life goin and get it goin in the morning
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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 12:39 am
by MadKNiFe

Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 2:54 pm
by Tragedy
i like it
it flowed perfect
and u had sum nice lines

That keeps you way above the waters like Jesus walked
The effort you put to something can't leave, a good name cannot be socks(spoilt

^^favorite bar

can u drop sum feed on my latest drop

Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 6:32 pm
by - Mutual -
welcome back good dope verse here
hope ya hit up the cyphers agin
8/10
dope all around really keep'em comin

Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 8:10 pm
by MadKNiFe
thanks for the feed, y'all . . Much appreciated