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This was suppose to be a audio battle but we both had problems so we decided to convert it to Text.

10 bars
Due withing a reasonable time

cats:
Punches.
Flow.
Wordplay.

when i first hurd ya track i knew u didnt murder that
sittin here thinkin man i kno i shud serve this kat
but i fell back n thought i guess ill let em have his fun
cuz we all kno that u aint gonna grab a gun
talkin like u slim shady im'a watch this rabbit run
fallin off beat i guess thats justa habit huh?
we dont needa nurse'ta tell i bring heat worse then hell
leavin u MIA kinda like kurse did rell
now that my pen is drippin i gotta premonition
this is gonna end with u and ur men missin
u can talk it homie but can u stand ur ground?
with them small feet n big nose this mans a clown!
my bad kid i was thinkin u were grown son
nah we all kno a set a balls u dont own none
come on man be real tell me what u done guy
maybe then ill let u live up until sunrise
im gettin tired of hearin u bitchin tho
even in tracks ur stutterin and twitchin hoe
dont come cryin man askin why u sayin that?
i told u plain and simple i aint playin jack

Kid thinks hes a beast on any of Trey Songz' Beats//*
Thats like his crew comin to a war, they got wrong heats//
You couldnt even rock the stage at a High School Show//
Because i could put you in a river and you still wouldnt flow//
Im the sun,I will melt ya Clique,Something called Global Warming//
Having Fun,Hear the bomb go Tick,Stop ya ass from ever Performing//
You Could right a song about Angels,But they wont Save you//**
Put a ball and chain around ur Ankles,No who'll Praise you?//
This kid Tramatik kisses on dudes like a faggot,Eat em up like Maggots//
Poker doesnt need anymore addicts,Throw down a full house like Bob Sagget/
You Have to love my Production and My Sound//
They Give you Instructions on how to fall to the ground//
Man Up and stop Covering your fucking face!//
Discovering Ya, Like you lost without a trace//
Break your Nose,and make ya pay 5 gs for the doctors Bill//
Spray the hose,bitch thats not a gun but ill cock at will//
My trigger finger wont ever stand so still//
Cost you Millions like Im divorcing Dr.Phill//
I wont hesitate to Give ya the Iron Knee,It's Not Irony,Its kinda Ironic//
Coz You cant Silent Me,Split ya wig like Tails than collect coins like Sonic//

5 4 3 2 1 YA SELF!

*did a song over a trey song rap
**had a song called angels

UPPING!

Punches: dead silence, had less punches but found more hard hitting.

Flow: tramatik...multies were better and the verse was easier to catch, dead silence needs to stop with the single rhymes in each line such as

Im the sun.. Yada yada then
Having fun... wtf that doesn't work for u.

Wordplay: dead silence... More attempts at worplay, neither of u were much at this cat..

Overall dead silence,

Both dudes did their thing and changed their styles up a bit for this battle, tram's verse was conversational to me, with those simple questions as a line didn't do. both verses were a bit basic and no outstanding punches or clever wordplay from either sides.

Dead silence just came out on top because his attempts were abit more entertaining and his vocab was a tiny bit stronger...not saying its strong at all but yeah.

Punches- Dead Silence
Flow- Tramatik
Wordplay- Dead Silence

Vote: DS

thnx for the votes

2-1

Punches - DS ..He Had Same Nice Punches Actually ..Both Had Some Good Punchess ..That Punch about Me Was Good, Woulda Been Better if it Was a Battle Wit Me ..DS I Liked Tha Full House Shit, That Last Bar Would Sound Good On Audio ..But DS Got This Cat Cus He Had Better Punches to Me, His Punches Were More Directed On Tramatik ..That Clown Bar From Tramatik Was Hella Wack to Me ..Coulda Been a lot More Orginal Wit Tha Punches ..

Flow - Tramatik Had Better Flow, He`s Flow Was a lot Smoother Than DS` ..Never Got Choppy ..DS Had a Few More Choppy Bars, I Think He Put Too Many Words in His Lines ..

Wordplay - DS Wordplay Was Decent, But Tramatik Barely Had Any ..

Vote - DS Brought a Harder Verse, Even Tho That Mia Punch Was Stabbin DS Was Juss Attackin Tramatik Thru Out Tha Whole Verse ..

wow

there we go.
this is what ive been waiting for.

3-1

Winner:
Me

Please update

good battle kiddo

3-1? Fuck does that mean?


4-1 is a T.K.O, man. lol.

Without an explained voted, because cats are bullshit. Dead Silence came with a more well rounded and better verse.

4-1 TKO.

Closed and Updated.