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Chernobyl · Post by **Chernobyl** » Mon Jul 21, 2008 10:06 pm

On Green Reefer/Mixed Wit Leak/I Defeat the Week With My Machine Features/
/this Extreme Leaders/Disses Hit Like Heat Seaker's/Sort'a Like Pac Busten/
Jaw Crushen/Like Golf Clubs Swung by Dolph Lundrin/Ur Fucken Soft/So When i'm
Buzzen Dog/It's Kinda Like Ducken Shot's From the russian Mobb.....

Half These Guys Spit Forced Filler's/Knowen Im The Sure Winner/so when i scorch wiggers/the highlightsof my Rhymes Should be on Sportscenter/The sickest of War's Entered/to SlayThese Special Olympic's Award Winners/Cuz i spit Until Your Hardly Alive/n Every line is Drama Like a Episode of Party Of Five....

So Fuck Street Pharmacist

This Guy's the end result of a heavy Trucker/ Fucking a Tranny Lover/
That looks like Danny Glover/ n Had Sex with Freddy's Mother/
Behind Denny's Dumpster/ without wearing Rubber's/ & out Came
street looking like Eddie Munster/ with his face steady covered/
n Mashedi Puncture's/ this Pansy Sucker/ spit's sketchy numbers/
Claimen to be a Rap Messiah/If He turned His head sideways/his Lips
Would Look like a Fat Vagina

ÐÛÇ£» · Post by **ÐÛÇ£»** » Tue Jul 22, 2008 4:14 am

LMaoooooooooooooooooo That Was A Nice Drop..
8.5....
Multis Was Nice...Flowed Smoothe And Etc..
Fav Line

This Guy's the end result of a heavy Trucker/ Fucking a Tranny Lover/
That looks like Danny Glover/ n Had Sex with Freddy's Mother/
Behind Denny's Dumpster/ without wearing Rubber's/ & out Came
street looking like Eddie Munster/

^^ Lmaooo Shit's Hella Funny Stay Up

DressToKill · Post by **DressToKill** » Tue Jul 22, 2008 8:24 am

I like your multies duke..definently got a creative mind from what duce quoted lol..keep dropping but try and bring some other elements into your drops like wordplay..would add alot to your already nice flow..and if you can id suggest fixing up your structure because it just makes the read easier in my opinion..but nice first drop I beleive?keep up

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Tue Jul 22, 2008 8:49 am

The Multis Was PRetty Koo..
The Flow Wus Koo..
U Clowned Street.. But Who Can't.. Not Talking Shit.. He's 2 Basic..
Jus Keep Dropping Kid..

|.R.SON.aLL.| · Post by **|.R.SON.aLL.|** » Tue Jul 22, 2008 8:56 am

This Was aiight ..
Multies Was Koo ..
Punches Were Decent ..
That Street Pharm Was Funny ..
That Was Tha Best Part imo ..
Everything Else Was Simple & Decent Tho ..

- Mutual - · Post by **- Mutual -** » Tue Jul 22, 2008 5:23 pm

this was sum tight or dope shit ya multies was fire ya flow was dope
great imagination
the dis to stret at the end was fantastic with all the names

This Guy's the end result of a heavy Trucker/ Fucking a Tranny Lover/
That looks like Danny Glover/ n Had Sex with Freddy's Mother/
Behind Denny's Dumpster/ without wearing Rubber's/ & out Came
street looking like Eddie Munster/ with his face steady covered/

my fav bit^

keep'em comin

Chernobyl · Post by **Chernobyl** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 8:38 am

your right,the structure was odd but ive never wrote in a box this big....
thanks for the feedback

Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Wed Jul 23, 2008 9:19 pm

good stuff man i like the new style u brought, ok multis and decent punches

keep up the good work

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