Nice post

was a lil lost at first.. when u said doing 6 again.. i was like.. 6 years jesus... but later u say months..

Over all Solid drop
Some good emotion in some lines..
Liked the flow int he beginning of the Second verse the most
the first verse it was hit or miss in places

i thought the ...

thx for feed.. yea.. damn i for got links.. i did feed to ruckus
ill feed another..


Good lookin out.

im told i need to express my self...
so i suppose its great that im sharin this...
But its not arrogance ....
when i say Fuck marrige counseling & i hate the therapist.
she says Marriage is built on compromise
So u will work this out... if you Care a bit
Now.... Go she Waits to take Care of ...

Hot... Just strait flames

LOL ... ur avrage Post is fire Ruck...
been waiting for a post from ya...

I guess now i got to post something.

keep that sick shit coming
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uppin... n Bored

Ha! ... More active? this is second thing this week i did...

Structure? Hmmmm IDK...

thats hard for me.. cuz i actuly stucture it the way i read it...

Fire...

Sickness... Like the Catfish line..

2nd verse was best... Few of those bars were amazing.

Id start Quoting other lines but ur adoring fans will be here soon to do that.

Ive stayed awake for the 6th day strait &
My Brains Dazed and racin... Pacein
The Fiber of my soul is Frayed n breakin...
I Asked Jesus For help.........He must be delayed....
Im waitin!!!
Now whos too afraid to prey to satan?
he says My Brain should Stay Blazzed and BakIn...
Like It was ...

i did the 2 boarder lands lines just for u ruck ...

Fire.. like always ...

I liked ur silly post more... but thats cuz its more mys tyle of shit lol...


Liked that beat u posted too..

The internet's all shit talkin... Its hard to Ingest the Rumors...
Yea my styles a lil crazed... but i often feel im best with Humor...
n dont give a fuck how i come off.... Like Breasts with Tumors...
eff the mastectomy...
Biggest asshole in class im the mass rectum see..
just ask em.. testin ...

Hip Hop 101 baby! ^^^^^^^^^^^ Ruck speakin the truth.


Vocab - multi syl rhymes - Metas - punches which often can be metas /

Flow.... all key things.. you dont need all of those things in a piece but the more the better it comes out...

Once u get some of that down you need... Topics... and ...

Strait Fire like always...

Uhhh... seems like u picked some vocab i wouldnt have expected...

Flows always there... ever since u started writing like u would to do Audios... avoiding the tounge twisting overly complex..

something i should work on...

Carried same theme all the way through its ...

Yea...


ok on this shit here.. yea i jump topics i write like i cypher...

Uhhh... The Format... hmm yes well u see when i did this in Word or what ever it was layed out much better.. Cut n paste dosnt like me much cuz doing so fucked it all up and i was lazy and didnt fix it.



Thx for feed ...

Lookin into my Ex's Eyes as i stab my last pen Inside...
Then Perhaps jenn would cry...
im Lauhin as she Gasps... Grapsin that.... she then would
die!
fuck Murder... These verses are mass Gen- O- Cide
Shit I makes a living at Killin Whores...
So Call my Number when ur no longer Feelin Yours ...