fuck the rules
y cant we just post our rhymes and have feedback
wtf hahha

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im so happy when im with u
when im not shit i miss u/
holding back just what ill do
i dont wana feel any remiss from u/
so for now ill just blow a kiss to u
my heat u stole and this love is true/
will u be my boo so beautiful like the sky is blue
dont worry baby u r too/
oh man u had me at hello
so ...

u better hold on dont let go/u cant move on cuz of all the bullshit u know/u may not know y u hide y u lied/no one can find the hurt the pain inside shit nobody tried/so take all the bullshit en throw em aside and just let u b u tonight/lifes a big oppsitcal/youll get thro it trust me there ant ...

oh oh here we go again (x4)
so let me begin wit a little quick slip/my chips r all in bitch ima win this shit/the stress is makin my ass sick/but its only the begining motherfucka its only the 1st ining/of this dream im only pretending the heat got my fuckin ass sweatin/now the storm clouds r rollin ...

my back is turned i swerved off the road crashed then burned/im on my return so fuck what ya heard/its not a bran new thing so ima do my thing to the best of my abbilty/i have the agility the seanceativity the motherfuckin creattivity to have someone believe in me/acheave in me instead of always ...

so get it twisted/sit back relax blaze a blunt and listen/cuz ur no match for my attacks u cant complete this mission/youll fall straight on your back theres so many parts of me youve been missin/all u c is tht i talk out/so walk the fine line and get fuckin struck out/whos on the cover now who song ...

so today will mark 6 months since my mom died so i wrote this.........motherfuckin minds racen the day be pasen/rewindin eveything your sayin but i never believed in prayin/a thousand miles per. sec./every fucked up thing i said i regret it/the pain is so great i even fuckin taste it so no reason ...

first off thx 4 the feed
and also i like your linesthe flow is nice and smooth
the rhmyes r sick to bro yo tht mirrors mockin your expressions part was so put together like i saw a visual of what u ment
keep writin....peace....

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hey pay attenshion/its like i got something to say but icant write it/goin crazy everyday and my mind hides it/writers blocks a bitch its like a motherfuckin ich u cant scrash/lookin back at my past wonderin how long this shit will last/these better days r commin untill then im stumblin/angers ...

when u look thro there eyes/dont tell me there ant hope/when u look thro the clearskys/dont tell me there ant hope/if we can just put our differentes aside maybe wed get along to night//V1//to the ones u truelylove/to the onestht didnt make it flyin highabove/im thinkin about u like all the time/now ...

ya dood my friend burned me a cd wit beats on it and i wrote this to 1 of the beats
theres plenty more where tht came from lol

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-- Sat Feb 12, 2011 7:13 am --

ya dood my friend burned me a cd wit beats on it and i ...

i got this world wit one hand spin and twisted/so sit and listen good job heres a bisket/hands up for the gran fan. get ready to rally/big sally willin to party spit a bottle of Pacardy/im off the subject but i ant done yet/over rated i win this game ive already played it/upstaged it so for no ...