Listen..


Nightmares glide to life, Like gradients at sunrise,
Eyelids rise again to blurred vision of wrists among ties,
Cracked leather, laced tightly.. Bound him to electric chairs,
Once justice, Now measured fair.. Key's in reach, just metric hairs,
Silhouette's of figures resembling that of ...

I step out the whip, laced to the tip/
Got a fresh white tee and some coke white kicks/

^^Alright..

Crisp new jeans and my hoody half zipped/
New Era cap with a real loose fit/

^^ Like stated previously, smooth flow.

Yo I never been a Blood and I don't claim Crip/
But you better watch your ...

Like the previous posts stated, you need to structure your written's better. Normally when people go into a thread, they won't bother feeding something that looks like a newspaper article. Presentation is [almost] everything. To the content; It was a nice/quick read with nothing to really gripe ...