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The only thing that hurts is the thought of emotions,
People talk behind your back until you catch the commotion/
Your thoughts have been broken, words in your head have been spoken, so you look back at the days that everyone was jokin/
And smiling, now you sittin back tryin not to cry, wishin ...

Thank you

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Damn I was really feelin this one. The way that I can just feel the expression expose in your words, line after line. Very talented id say. Keep it up bro can't wait to here more

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Man you definitely got that right. Thanks

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I push the rewind button and playback thoughts,
How could we end it like this? My minds so lost/
Repatin them words I guess you gotta pay the cost,
With shattered dreams, hopes, memories, and the lines that you crossed/
I tossed them all away, broken promise after promise,
All I asked for was your ...

I like this a lot. You have very good wordplay. Everything seems to fit perfectly and you have a different choice of words in each line. Keep posting because id definitely like to hear more

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I have to agree. Structure I liked, but I wasn't really feeling the topic. Keep it up though, i'd like to hear some more

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Its J-Killa, time to do the real thang,
Chillin in my whip now its time to let the doors swang/
Kush smoke spray ain't a damn thang changed,
Poppin at you lames like I belong to a shooting range/
You want me to show you how to play the game,
Cuz I'm flyer than a plane
I'll stimulate your brain/
You ...

We sittin in them big trucks on the 22's, what you lookin at cuz we ain't tryin to roll wit you/
what you gon' do, ain't shit that you gon' do cuz if you fuck wit me you'll be fuckin wit the whole crew/
Yeah and if the bullets don't hit ya I'll lock that shit on ya like a heat seekin missle on a ...